Bubbaclark Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 This is definitely shaping up to be my favorite card so far. It was mostly inspired by my real favorite Yu-Gi-Oh card: Valkyrion the Magna Warrior: I had it once (got from McDonalds lol) and I lost it. :[. Oh well, useless info, here's the card: Credit to *DeusApterous on deviantART for the image. Effect: When a monster is Special Summoned, increase the ATK of this card by 400. If both player's have at least 3 monsters on the field, you can decrease the DEF of this card by 500. Both players then select 1 monster on their opponent's side of the field. Destroy all monsters on the field except the selected ones. If this card is destroyed by the effect of an Equip-Spell card on a monster, at the End Phase of the turn, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK equal to or less than 2000 in Attack Position from your hand or Graveyard. The effect is my biggest concern, I have the right idea for it and I might add more, but the OCG seems off. Basically what I'm trying to say is: Everytime someone Special Summons, increase the ATK of the card by 400. Then if BOTH players have 3 monsters on their side of the field, decrease this card's DEF by 500, then each player selects a card for the other player to keep, then destroy all the other remaining monsters. What I basically did was added the Gold Sticker, and combined 2 Holo Sheets for the holo. Really need some feedback. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister T x2 Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 nice retard type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Uhm, buddy you were looking at the wrong card lol, look at the second card on the page, the "Valkyrame: Admiral of the Gamma Force" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Correct OCG: When a monster is Special Summoned, increase the ATK of this card by 400. If both player's have at least 3 monsters on the field, you can decrease the DEF of this card by 500. Both players the select 1 monster on their opponent's side of the field. Destroy all monsters on the field except the selected ones. This looks more correct and easier to understand. A Ruling to avoid confusion and arguments regarding the ATK: The increase in ATK lasts as long as the card is face-up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Thanks judgement. Fixed it all up and added another effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 It can't have two printed types, you have to pick either Rock or Machine, not both. If you want it to have both, whichever you don't pick to be printed on the card can be added with a line in the effect like this: "This card is also treated as X-Type" where X is the type not printed on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Oh woops, I thought I had erased the Machine before. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 you can't have 2 attribute types in a monster! it doesn't make any sense! and the picture's pixelated! 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 the picture's pixelated! It's called a holo. It is intended to give the card a Prismatic Secret Rare look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 you can't have 2 attribute types in a monster! it doesn't make any sense! and the picture's pixelated! 6/10. Monsters can have two Attributes. You should do this for the types. Either "This card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster", or This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster". That should kinda help =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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