Nighthawk14 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 This is just a plain trap card so PLEASE comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 You need to improve a bit your OCG. I don't know so much but maybe like this: "When your opponent's monster attacks a face-up DARK Monster on your side of the field, destroy the attacking monster. During the End Phase Special Summon the destroyed monster. The Special Summoned monster is treated as DARK, and it returns to your opponent's side of the field during your next End Phase".Your avatar is cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Thanx for the comments anyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UGHAR Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 AWESOME 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ej3003 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 You need to improve a bit your OCG. I don't know so much but maybe like this: "When your opponent's monster attacks a face-up DARK Monster on your side of the field' date=' destroy the attacking monster. During the End Phase Special Summon the destroyed monster. The Special Summoned monster is treated as DARK, and it returns to your opponent's side of the field during your next End Phase".Your avatar is cool.[/quote']Â i agree with Envoy of Infinity. all u need to do is modify the effect and it should be fine.i'll give it an 8.5/10 for the effect errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 You need to improve a bit your OCG. I don't know so much but maybe like this: "When your opponent's monster attacks a face-up DARK Monster on your side of the field' date=' destroy the attacking monster. During [b']your[/b] End Phase, Special Summon the destroyed monster. The Special Summoned monster is treated as DARK, and it returns to your opponent's side of the field during your next End Phase".Your avatar is cool. Bold changes are fixes, pretty good. Minor errors, 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATG3192 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Hm...I only noticed cap and punctuation errors. I love the idea, awesome for a fiend or spellcaster type deck! I also agree with Envoy, that seems like it would be a fitting effect for it. The name and pic are amazingly simple...yet they totally work! lol. 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 You need to improve a bit your OCG. I don't know so much but maybe like this: "When your opponent's monster attacks a face-up DARK Monster on your side of the field' date=' destroy the attacking monster. During the End Phase Special Summon the destroyed monster. The Special Summoned monster is treated as DARK, and it returns to your opponent's side of the field during your next End Phase".Your avatar is cool.[/quote']^That^8.5/10. I want this for my Darkness Deck ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Than guys I made this one a while ago my OCG has improved a little ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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