Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 [align=center]Meet Mahl Zenn Zhong Hi is a cyborg, dragon, spirit, zombie, monster thing. I figured Fiend is the best neutral ground. He is sexy. You can Special Summon this card from your hand when your opponent activates the effect of a card that removes monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned by its own effect, you can send 6 Level 6 or higher DARK monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle, you must equip 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to this card. If you cannot, destroy this card. This card gains ATK equal to the DEF of the equipped card. If this card has more than 3 cards equipped to it, destroy this card. When this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy 1 Equip Card equipped to this card instead. Long effect for me. I know. I had to cut out alot of stuff just to get that. And its STILL too long. I will post holo version later if I can get Null_ptr to holo it for me. ;) enjoy![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 9/10no OGC errors at allmake it 2 tributes instead of 1 though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Confusing, but good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 lol, when I saw the title, I thought it said "Mao Ze Dong" for a second. Hm. It's a good card. I like it.In fact, the more I look at it, the more balanced and likable it becomes. lol. I do believe this is a 10/10 [spoiler=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 -OCG is great-Pic is good-Effect is nice -Tiger's Overall Rating: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks guys. Hey OMGAKITTY, I want a seal of approval. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 lol, give me a pic, and I'll make you one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 maybe later. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 It's effect seem similar to Relinquished and Thousand Eyes Restrict, but the rest of the effect is original, a very powerful card and I like long effects, it's just looks awesome with a Strong Looking Monster for a created card. 10/10, Nice job! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mago Arcano de los Aesir Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Not bad, although it's OP'ed if you keep it on the field long enough. I give it a :9.3/10 Snipeh Kitteh approves of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Thanks. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Awesome effect. Pic is pretty good. OCG is great. What else would you expect from a legendary? 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Nothing less. I worked for my title. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Lol all it needs is a name and card holo XD GJ 9.87/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 I'll get one of those soon. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Does that mean it can negate its destruction by removing one of the 3 equipped monster cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 instead of making the effect that equips monsters to this card optional "...you can equip 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to this card." make it a requirement "equip 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to this card." That will make it just a little harder to keep on the field. This will shut up anyone who wants to call this card op'ed. right now i give it a 9.8/10...w/ the above-mentioned change it's a 10/10 easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Well I'm not entirely in love with the pic, but it's pretty good. This line just seems funny to me, and I know it's in real cards: If this card has more than 3 cards equipped to it, destroy this card. Is that saying the owner of the card screws up and actually equips more than 3 monsters to it? Everything else is flawless, and the things I just mentioned are maybe just me. Overall 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Thanks everyone. I will seriously try to remember to add that in. Its a good suggestion. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 I have to rate a quick 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"Santa's Envoy" Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 instead of making the effect that equips monsters to this card optional "...you can equip 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to this card." make it a requirement "equip 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to this card." That will make it just a little harder to keep on the field. This will shut up anyone who wants to call this card op'ed. right now i give it a 9.8/10...w/ the above-mentioned change it's a 10/10 easily. Yes, it would make it more balanced. Also, the added power by each equipped monster card could be arranged to a fixed amount, or by another (not so straightforward) means, such as 100x the Star Level of the equipped monster. With the mentioned modification, 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Great card. Balanced, OCG is flawless, I dont think you can cut any more of the effect out without ruining it. If you got rid of the destruction effect the card would become overpowered, if you got rid of the built-in Special Summon capabilities of this card, it wouldnt be worth using, if you got rid of the dump 6 Level 6 DARKs the card wouldnt be playable enough. Seriously, I think the effect is acceptable to be that long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 thanks everyone. Alternative effect version added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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