OCN2345 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 I hope these are better. :D If you control no cards except this card, discard 1 card from your hand. Then, Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" or "Red-Eyes B. Dragon" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. You cannot activate this card during your first turn. You can only activate 1 "Dark Dragon Light" per turn. If you control a "Red-Eyes B. Dragon", discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 monster on the field. Blue-Eyes White Dragon + Red-Eyes Black DragonThis card can only be Fusion Summoned with the above Fusion Material monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with DARK or LIGHT monsters. This card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects that involve LIGHT or DARK monsters.This card gains 100 ATK for each LIGHT or DARK monster your opponent has on the field or in their Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 the amount of people who did this before... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 there good but after DARK and LGHT dont put the word attribute and you could have just edited your first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 These are actually pretty good for a new member. Although, they are overpowered. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Great Job 10/10' date=' but did you really draw those?[/quote'] ^of course he didnt -and people have done this idea a thousand times before.-also, if you want to change the level of the card, don't post it twice, just change your last post.-I'm not going to rate cos you will NEG me.-i like the oxymoron of LIGHT and DARK. but maybe its a too high contrast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 today, I felt like examining some post really deeply.. so I'll try to correct everything I can: Dark Dragon Light:(first: there is no card in the game with the name "Red-Eyes Black Dragon". if you look closely, you'll see that the name is actually "Red-Eyes B. Dragon".second: make it a little harder to use. a free [ancient rules/ monster reborn/ +special summoner from the deck] is kinda overpowered if the only cost is that you have to control no monsters.. try something like:If you control no cards, discard 1 card from your hand. Then, Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" or "Red-Eyes B. Dragon" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. You can't activate this card during your first turn. You can only activate 1 "Dark Dragon Light" per turn.and another thing, about what YOU wrote in your card. you never write "may", you have to write "can". Mega Inferno Fire blast:(OCG FIX:)If you control a "Red-Eyes B. Dragon", destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponent's field.(you can see all things I changed in this card by yourself.. but speaking of the effect, you don't need to inflict damage for a "harpie's feather duster" copy.. look at "dark magic attack". dragons already have too many boosts and too high ATKs to on top of that have this card...... another quick note.. never write "LP", always write "Life Points".and the pic doesn't have a background and doesn't seem to interesting.. I suggest you find a better one) White Lightning Strike:("Burst Stream of Destruction" in an overpowered way, I suggest you get rid of this card) Dark Light Dragon:Blue-Eyes White Dragon + Red-Eyes B. DragonThis card can only be Fusion Summoned with the above Fusion Material monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with DARK or LIGHT monsters. [insert the inmunity effect here]. This card gains 200 ATK for each LIGHT or DARK monster on the field or in either player's Graveyard.(I don't know how to re-word that effect, give some examples of what you mean and I may think of something. this fusion didn't have that many OCG errors.. just the order in which the effects where written. and I would suggest you lower that increasing ATK effect to 100.. this dragon is already 3200 ATK to begin with and I've done a red eyes/blue eyes deck before and its not that hard to pull out.. (overpowered)yup) sor far my rate is 7/10 for a begginer :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 I lkie the Idea, and the ocg wasn't perfect but it's better than alot of the people on this site can do:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Nice try but yours cards are overpowered. I love some pics but you have a bad OCG. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCN2345 Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thx for the tips sleepy, i'll be sure to edit the cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 oops forgot to rate 8/10 OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ELPatoloco21 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Great fusion card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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