legendhiro Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 [Align=center]i haven't had a lot of free time lately, but i have over the past couple of days so i decided to post the last few cards that i made, hoping to make them the basis of a set. i don't know when this thread will be updated, but i hope to at least update periodically with more cards in the set until i reach 50. So, I've put them in order of how they'll be in the final version:(all images courtesy of Photobucket (i'm still working on finding the links) or the awesome Father Wolf) [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Normal Summoned by releasing 3 "Starfighter" Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned place 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" on it. you cannot add more than 4 "Defense Shield Counters" in this way. When your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, place one "Deflector Shield Counter" on this card. At the beginning of each of your Standby Phases, place 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" on this card. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 x the number of "Deflector Shield Counters" on it. When this card would be destroyed you can remove 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" from it instead. When this card becomes the target of you opponent's Spell or Trap Card effect you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 to negate the effect and destroy the card. [spoiler=Effect]When this card is Normal Summoned you can Special Summon 1 "Starfighter - Support Fighter" from your hand in face-up Attack Position. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every "Starfighter" Monster that you control. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can pay Life Points equal to 100 x the level of a "Starfighter" Monster you control to increase the ATK of that monster by 100 x its level until the End Phase. If you control a "Warship" Monster when this monster is destroyed by battle you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Starfighter - Support Fighter" from your deck. [spoiler=Effect]When this card is Normal Summoned place 2 "Bombardment Counters" on it. Increase the ATK of this card by 650 for each "Bombardment Counter" on it. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every other "Starfighter" Monster that you control. Once per turn you can remove 1 "Bombardment Counter" from this card to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap card that your opponent controls. If you control a "Warship" Monster when this monster is destroyed by battle you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Starfighter - Bomber" from your deck. Treat this Special Summon as a Normal Summon for the purpose of card effects. [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Starfighter" Monster in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, place 2 "Squad Counters" on it. Increase the ATK of this card by 600 for every "Squad Counter" on it. When this face-up card would be destroyed, except by battle, remove 1 "Squad Counter" from it instead. Once per turn if you control a "Warship" Monster when this card would be destroyed by battle, unless there are no "Squad Counters" on this card, you can pay 900 Life Points and this card is not destroyed. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Normal Summoned by releasing 1 "Starfighter" Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned place 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" on it. When your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, place one "Deflector Shield Counter" on this card. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for every "Deflector Shield Counter" on it. when this card would be destroyed by battle you can remove 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" from it instead. The first time that this card in defense position would be destroyed by battle you can halve its ATK and DEF and change it to attack position and it is not destroyed. If you do, this card cannot be flipped face-down or change its battle position. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Normal Summoned by releasing 2 "Starfighter" Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned place 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" on it. When your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, place one "Deflector Shield Counter" on this card. When this card would be destroyed by battle you can remove 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" from it instead. Once per turn, when your opponent declares an attack, you can pay 500 Life Points to change your opponent's attack target to this card. Increase the DEF of this card by 200 x the number of "Deflector Shield Counters" on it. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Normal Summoned by releasing 2 "Starfighter" Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned place 2 "Deflector Shield Counter" on it. When your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, place one "Deflector Shield Counter" on this card. When this card would be destroyed by battle you can remove 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" from it instead. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every "Starfighter" Monster that you control. Increase the ATK of every "Starfighter" Monster that you control by 100 for every "Starfighter" or "Warship" Monster that you control. [spoiler=Effect]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing one "Millennium Shield" that you control. Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up Warrior-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. Increase the DEF of the equipped monster by 900. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, you can pay 1000 Life Points once per turn to switch the original ATK and DEF of the equipped monster until the End Phase. At this time, if the equipped monster's ATK is lower than it was when this effect activated, increase the ATK of the equipped monster by the DEF of this card until the End Phase (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) [spoiler=Effect]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When you activate "Otherworld - The "A" Zone" you can return one Formchanger that you control to your Deck to Special Summon this Monster from your hand. This monster is an "Alien" monster. When this monster is successfully summoned you can send up to 7 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. If you do, place one A-Counter on a face-up monster on the field for each "Alien" monster discarded. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each A-Counter on the field. Negate this effect if you do not control a face-up "Otherworld - The "A" Zone". You can only control one Formchanger Monster at a time. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Inexperienced Pixie". Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each Fairy-Type monster face-up on the field. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can pay 500 Life Points and select one monster on the field. The selected monster becomes a Fairy-Type monster until the End Phase. When this monster destroys a Fairy-Type monster by battle you gain Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 100. [spoiler=Effect]"Starfighter - X1" + "Starfighter - Bomber"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards you control (You do not use "Polymerization"). Once per turn you can discard one card from your hand to Special Summon one "Tactical Mine Token" (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position one your opponent's side of the field, or to place one "Tactical Mine Counter" on one Spell or Trap card on the field. When a "Tactical Mine Token" is destroyed by battle its controller takes 800 damage. When a Spell or Trap card with a "Tactical Mine Counter" on it activates, your opponent takes 1000 damage. This card gains 200 ATK for every "Tactical Mine Counter" or "Tactical Mine Token" on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle while you control a face-up "Warship" monster, you can Special Summon one of the Fusion Material Monsters from your Graveyard. This Summon is treated as a Normal Summon for the purpose of card effects. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 If I were to read every single effect, it's like I'm a reading a 15 pg. novel. From the 5 I read, it sounds pretty good, you have an interesting idea. Have some capitalization/ocg errors here and there. Pics are pretty bland, their okay, but they could use some interesting colors. Overall, 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 its tough finding pics that look like what i want them to look like. i wanted to steer away from anything TOO recognizable, like Star Wars, whenever possible. and as for capitalization/ocg errors, anyone who would point any out would be greatly appreciated. i have very little free time to do it myself right now. there may even be something in it for you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppgggr Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 eh there ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 well, nice cards. first pic needs BG don't use "one", "two"... in your effects. it's "1" , "2"... other than that, nice cards; I like the idea 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 thanks for the 1 instead of one thing. i do a lot of writing where i spell the numbers out and its an old habit. i'll change it when i get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Well capitalize everything that's either, ATK/DEF/Life Points/Battle Damage/Deck/Tribute/Tributing/Normal Summon/Set/Special Summon/Tribute Summon/Attack Position/Defense Position I think on most of your cards its "attack position" capitalize both words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 thanks for the 1 instead of one thing. i do a lot of writing where i spell the numbers out and its an old habit. i'll change it when i get the chance. that's ok. I like helping people :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 sorry no time to fix grammar problems yet. i barely had time to get the new chapter in my fic up *sighs* i'm a little overworked lately. oh right, sorry for rambling. bump! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 somebody say something. bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 again with the bumping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 so i finally got some time to update these. i fixed ocg, gave the first card a new pic with a background, and added two more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 You need pic credit photobucket doesn't cut it anymore you need the link or the name of the artist, but your cards are awesome man make more! make more! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 thanks ^__^ i'm working on going back and finding all the links to the images again, but its taking time. don't worry, more cards are coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heero_Yuy Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 not bad;)7/10 Fighter cards are a bit weak 1000 or 1200 ATK would be eventually good^^the effect of guardian class would be so evenually better:This card can only be Normal Summoned by removing 1 "Starfighter" Monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Normal Summoned place 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" on it.Each time you or your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, put 1 Deflector Shield Counter on this card.Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for every "Deflector Shield Counter" on it.when this card would be destroyed by battle you can remove 1 "Deflector Shield Counter" from it instead.The first time that this card in defense position would be destroyed by battle you can halve its ATK and DEF and change it to attack position and it is not destroyed. If you do, this card cannot be flipped face-down or change its battle position.Your opponent cannot attack other monsters other than this.the ATK of the guardian class make a bit higher^^Otherwise not bad.Here are 2 sets from me:[Digimon Sets][Gundam Seed Destiny and Super Robot Wars]one question,how makes one this "click to view?Sorry for the terrible english:oops:im from germany and my english is terrible;)MFG Heero Yuy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 actually the spell to add counter thing is pretty good. i wanted to come up with a way for them to rebuild counters without being op'ed in any way. i might steal that one from you ^__^ fighters are weak because they are designed to rely on combos and to only have to stay out long enough to summon a Warship. thanks, your post actually helped me out a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 one question' date='how makes one this "click to view?[/quote'] http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-99616.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ELPatoloco21 Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 MEH, THERE NOT BAD IM JUST TO LAZY TO READ THOSE EFFECTS SO I'LL TAKE A SHOT IN THE DARK AND SAY THEY ARE GOOD 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 tsk tsk. well, thanks for the rate anyway. if you did read them all i think you'd like them about that much, so i won't complain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heero_Yuy Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 thanks for the answer^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 no problemps if anyone needs to find something on the site pm me and i'll help find it.i'm just that cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira_Fuma Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 good cards and nice idea, 8/10. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Nice OCG, some pics are good but some need a BG. Good effects and a nice idea so 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 updated with seven new cards!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 seriously, nothing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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