Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Newest card. I believe this is a card that is different from all of the others i've seen so far, so enjoy. Rates/Comments/Fixes Please. Image Credit goes to ~PoporokuriPhoka. Effect: You can only activate this card's effect during your opponent's Draw Phase, call the type of the card (Monster, Spell, or Trap) that will be drawn. If your call is right, the card is destroyed and removed from play, and increase your Life Points by 1000. If your call is wrong, discard 1 card from your hand or your field, and decrease your Life Points by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 look at Ordeal of a Traveler to fix your OCG not predict Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Well what other word would I use?Oh alright got it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 nice consept and nice pic :) ..... the ocg is not perfect but the card has an 8/10 from me :) sinse it can use that quick play card that (don't remember the name) rearranges 3 cards from the top of your opponent's deck in the order you want to make them loose at least 3 draw phases and gain some life :D ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 OCG FIX: During your opponent's Draw Phase, choose 1 card type (Monster, Spell or Trap Card). If the card your opponent drew was the same type you chose, the card is removed from play and you gain 1000 Life Points. If not, send 1 card from your hand or field to the Graveyard and take 500 damage. that's how I would write it although I can sense some errors in my correction ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Well I followed it from a similar real card that sasuke mentioned. Ordeal of a Traveler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 IT'S CUTE!!! I love the image. They already mentioned the OCG suggestion. I like the idea. 9.5/10 =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Ya, I thought it was different hehe, guess I was wrong. :/. Well the other one is a trap, this is a monster, so I guess it's a little different. Maybe I should add a Level twist on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I real like it, but it is hard to rate with the OCG burning my eyes.for now i can only rate a 6/10 (if OCG is fixed i will give you 9/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Is it really hard to understand now? It seems fine to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 You made the OCG harder than it has to be but you are right. The concept is understood in it so i will give you that 9/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Alright thanks. If you can post what you think is wrong with it, i'll take it into consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Ok here is my suggestion, "You can only activate this card's effect during your opponent's Draw Phase, *guess* the type of card (Monster, Spell, or Trap) that your opponent will draw. If you guess correctly, the card is destroyed and removed from play *no comma* and increase your Life Points by 1000. *I suggest you change it to 500* If you guess incorrectly, discard 1 card from your hand or your *Capital (F)* Field and Decrease your Life Points by 500." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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