Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 [spoiler=Card Lore] This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type Monster. A Warrior-Type Monster equipped with this card is also treated as a Dragon-Type Monster. When the equiped monster attacks a Dragon-Type monster, remove it from play before the Battle Step and increase the equiped monster's ATK by the removed monster's Level x100 When this card is removed from the field, your opponent can choose to Special Summon up to 5 removed from play Dragon-Type monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Whenever the Monster equipped with this card Declares an Attack on a Dragon-Type Monster This card died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 great...well spell cards are not my thing then.Could you at least rate...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 0/10 Why? 1. It limits use to Warriors. 2. It only has an effect against a certain Type. 3. Such thinkin' is ancient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I like the card. 1. Is that Angelina Jolie?2. Nice thinking for the effect. 3. Some OCG Errors4. Name is pretty cliche. Overall: 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 1. I don't know lol2. Thank You3. No one is perfect :P4. Lol well what else would work in this case.0/10 Why? 1. It limits use to Warriors. 2. It only has an effect against a certain Type. 3. Such thinkin' is ancient. If you were to use this against a person with a dragon deck it would be good. Plus a warrior monster is common in a lot decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type Monster. A Warrior-Type Monster equipped with this card is also treated as a Dragon-Type Monster. When the equiped monster attacks a Dragon-Type monster, remove it from play before the Battle Step and increase the equiped monster's ATK by the removed monster's Level x50.(I suggest you make it like at least 200 sinse its against a sertain type, it can be stronger) When this card is removed from the field(comma!) your opponent can choose to Special Summon up to 5 removed from play Dragon-Type monsters. like the card :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thanks for the OCG help :DI shall edit it now, but i will make the ATK increase 100 instead of 200 because when you think about it Blue Eyes White Dragon (common dragon type monster) is 8 stars and 8 x 200 = 1600, thus increasing the ATK by 1600 which is OP for a a card like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Better bet: radically edit the card such that the end product is one with a different effect. The premise on which this card relies in silly (to use the kindest word possible at this moment). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 yeah, guess you are right :) you can always change the type of monsters you are fighting wind with card effects... in fact, I just got an idea about cards revolving around other card effects :D I'll just write it down for now until I finish some stuff thanks for the rep ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Better bet: radically edit the card such that the end product is one with a different effect. The premise on which this card relies in silly (to use the kindest word possible at this moment). If i "radically edit" the card the concept will no longer be the same' date=' thus this card will no longer exist.[hr']yeah' date=' guess you are right :) you can always change the type of monsters you are fighting wind with card effects... in fact, I just got an idea about cards revolving around other card effects :D I'll just write it down for now until I finish some stuff thanks for the rep ^-^[/quote'] Thank you for the help. Good luck with your card. And you deserved that rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 If i "radically edit" the card the concept will no longer be the same, thus this card will no longer exist. Exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Well easiest way to come up with a picture is their expressions and backgrounds. Ok, so I see a red eye on the sword. Maybe it resembles evil. There's a dark background. It's a girl. So put it together, "Stare of the Devil's Mistress". W/e. Just put stuff together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Yah...but whats that have to do with dragons :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Essa Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 quite a cool card i like the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Seems like I've seen that idea before but i do like it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeAir Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Sry about the red dragon my friend made that description and hes kind of dumb.so here are my first three cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 wow... pretty good ocg for a newb =D8.2/10 (I'm nicer than all of you! I gave him the highest rating... HA! and HAHA!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I like the card, some OCG errors. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 wow... pretty good ocg for a newb =D8.2/10 (I'm nicer than all of you! I gave him the highest rating... HA! and HAHA!) lol thanksand as for the OCG I have been a guest for the last week and I finally decided to register. :PSry about the red dragon my friend made that description and hes kind of dumb.so here are my first three cards Umm... not to be mean but those are severely OPed for only 2 tributes, and they are attachments, and what are they doing in my thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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