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When your oponent draw's use this card. If the card your oponent drew was a monster card you can draw 1 card, if the card you drew is a monster card destroy the card if the card you drew was a magic or trap card, keep the card, draw another card. If your oponents card was a magic or trap card you can inflect 1000 damage directly to your oponents Life Points.

 

 

i will be posting on who helped me with the ocg and the first 5 people who helps get reputation XD and the others will l8er XD

1.twisted

ur = your

distroy = destroy

Learn spelling and grammer.

2.apple_cream

ur=your

u=You

inflect=inflict

life points=Life Points

there is quite a few ocg errors I will post a few of the corrections later

3.yujioooh

A few noticeable OCG errors,

 

remember when making cards, make them look as realistic as possible, spell correctly (maybe download a spellcheck) and revise your sentences making sure they make sense.

 

The Image is good, interesting effect

 

you seem like your on your way to being a good member, keep a positive attitude, make good cards ad you will be chilling with the pro's in no time *thumbs up*

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ok my other one got locked cause theres no counters so heres a diferent version of it so yea take a look

 

new card and rate and coment on both...

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When this card is attacked after damage calculation specal summon that monster onto your side of the field. Sacrifice the monster this card speacal summond to bring this card back from the graveyard.

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[align=center]A few noticeable OCG errors,

 

remember when making cards, make them look as realistic as possible, spell correctly (maybe download a spellcheck) and revise your sentences making sure they make sense.

 

The Image is good, interesting effect

 

you seem like your on your way to being a good member, keep a positive attitude, make good cards ad you will be chilling with the pro's in no time *thumbs up* :P[/align]

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[align=center]A few noticeable OCG errors' date='

 

remember when making cards, make them look as realistic as possible, spell correctly (maybe download a spellcheck) and revise your sentences making sure they make sense.

 

The Image is good, interesting effect

 

you seem like your on your way to being a good member, keep a positive attitude, make good cards ad you will be chilling with the pro's in no time *thumbs up* :P[/b'][/align]

 

thanks rep +1

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You can only activate this card when your opponent draws a card. Your opponent must show you the card. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the type of the card: -Monster Card: Draw 1 card. If you drew a Monster Card, discard it. If you drew a Spell or Trap Card, show it to your opponent and draw 1 more card. -Spell or Trap Card: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

 

that's my suggestion :) it seems interesting, I'm not sure if its too good or not, but it would be fun to put in a deck :D

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You can only activate this card when your opponent draws a card. Your opponent must show you the card. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the type of the card: -Monster Card: Draw 1 card. If you drew a Monster Card' date=' discard it. If you drew a Spell or Trap Card, show it to your opponent and draw 1 more card. -Spell or Trap Card: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/b']

 

that's my suggestion :) it seems interesting, I'm not sure if its too good or not, but it would be fun to put in a deck :D

 

thanks for the suggestion but man its not egzactly what i meanby my effect but thanks though u will get +1 rep for trying XD

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This card is activated when your opponent's draws a card,if it is a Spell or Trap card inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponents Life Points, if the card is a monster you may draw 1 card. If you draw a monster due to this cards effect discard it, if it is a Spell or Trap draw 1 card.

 

I'm not sure if its right but it's closer then before. Anyway keep working on it you have good ideas, but you need to work on OCG and spelling. Opps din't see that sleepy had posted, sleepys is more likely correct

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Lots of OCG errors. If you want attention you're doing a good job. Moderators and Admins are checking each forum for spammers like you. If you don't quit making HORRIBLE cards that don't appeal to anybody and making spam posts and spam threads, the ban you'll probably get hopefully stops you from doing so. So far, you've made 2 spam threads, LOTS of spam posts, 3 negative reputations, and for some reason 40 points. You don't really seem one to deserve even 40. If I catch you again, be warned, I'll just simply report you. And by the way, I know this isn't a spam thread, but the card really sucks.

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