New trap card that stops opponents from drawing(added 1 magic card to it)

[hamcha]

img cred goes to Fatherwolf

 

 

[spoiler=lore]Your opponent cannot draw any cards until your fifth Standby Phase. While this card is on the field, you must Tribute 1 monster during each of your End Phases. If you cannot, your opponent draws 1 card for each of his/her Draw Phases that has passed since this card's activation.

 

 

 

[spoiler=lore]Every time a monster is Summoned, Set, Fusion Summon, or Synchro Summon, Draw 5 cards from your deck and put 3 cards back in your deck.

 

 

Holo sheet credits goes to Ashje

[Guest JoshIcy]

Lolz.

Can someone say "Token Control"?

[【Demonic Queen】]

With scape goat this card is so broken. Not to mention Skip draw or whatever got banned and isn't half as good as this card. Well nice try though.

[hamcha]

With scape goat this card is so broken. Not to mention Skip draw or whatever got banned and isn't half as good as this card. Well nice try though.

 

just to tell you that "scapegoat" is a token and cannot be use for tribute so it is not broken.

[【Demonic Queen】]

Correction ''Scapegoat'' Cannot be used for tribute for a Tribute summon, that doesn't include card effect tributes

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

ocg errors...a lot of them

[hamcha]

ocg errors...a lot of them

 

if you can, can u pls reword the effect for me.

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

MAKE THIS CARD A CONTINUOUS TRAP CARD

 

Here is the corrected OCG (I changed a couple of things according to what I assumed you meant...hope you dont mind)

 

Your opponent cannot draw any cards until your fifth Standby Phase. While this card is on the field, you must Tribute 1 monster during each of your End Phases. If you cannot, your opponent draws 1 card for each of his/her Draw Phases that has passed since this card's activation.

 

BTW...this card is still a lil OP

[Tabris]

It's ridiculously banworthy.

[hamcha]

thnx fo comments

[Yankee]

Increadibly overpowered. The grammar/ocg could be better too.

 

Reasons:

First of all, your opponent can't draw for 5 turns. Thats just strong.

Then, lets say your deep into the duel, if you use it's effect for 4 turns (saying your opponent would live even tho they went 4 turns without anything new, and you still getting stuff), and then don't tribute a monster, then your opponent would draw 20 cards. More likley than not, that is a deckout.

 

And the grammar/ocg is easy too see.

BTW, typo on the last work. You say

"In used"

Supposed to be

"In use"

;)

[Sleepy]

ridiculous.. its too overpowered... not only you are skipping your opponent's next 5 draw phases, but you are stoping them from drawing at all.... and if you don't tribute the monster as stated above, its a deckout. I would change the effect to something like:

As long as this card remains face-up, skip your opponent's Draw Phse. Destroy this card during your opponent's 4th Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, your opponent draws cards equal to the number of skipped Draw Phases +1.

I think even like that is too strong, but thats an improvement.

[JinKazama]

1st card = banworthy

 

2nd card = not so bad. 7/10

[Sleepy]

that second card is a stronger graceful charity... and why isn't Ritual Summon there too? to make it shorter is better to say "When a monster is Summoned or Set." rather than writting:"Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, Set, Fusion Summoned, Ritual Summoned, Synchro Summoned, or Special Summoned." (I know you didn't cobered all these but if you do, the first way is the shortest that covers everything)

 

you usually say each, not every.

and I hope that doesn't mean that this card will be active for all the turn :/