Pot of Evil

[Dark Archon]

[spoiler=Effect]You can only activate this card when your opponent draws a card. Discard one card from your hand to send your opponents hand to the graveyard, your opponent draws 2 cards during each of their Draw Phases for 3 turns, then destroy this card.

 

comment and rate plz :)

[spoiler=Pic Credit] http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-18348.html

 

[Sleepy]

its weird but I say it will do just fine :) some OCG errors.. let me help with that:

 

You can only activate this card by discarding 1 card from your hand when your opponent draws a card(s). Discard all cards in your opponent's hand. As long as this card is face-up, your opponent draws 1 extra card during their Draw Phase. Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after activation.

 

:)

[K.B. strategist]

1, not one

1, not a

Graveyard

replace the comma after Graveyard with a period, and take out the word "then"

Needs some re-wording. Use with this sentence: "During your third Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy this card." instead of what you have now.

 

Completely broken, even without the loophole that lets you discard their hand each time they draw an extra card because of this card's effect. Make it so it can only be activated when your opponent draws outside of his/her Draw Phase, and re-word it so you can't activate it every single time they do that. Then, instead of the extra 2 cards every Draw Phase make it so "your opponent draws 4-5 ( doesn't matter which one) cards at the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect"

 

For now, 3/10

[assanaut]

Good pic, horrible everything. 1/10.

[Sleepy]

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1, not a

[b']G[/b]raveyard

replace the comma after Graveyard with a period, and take out the word "then"

Needs some re-wording. Use with this sentence: "During your third Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy this card." instead of what you have now.

 

Completely broken, even without the loophole that lets you discard their hand each time they draw an extra card because of this card's effect. Make it so it can only be activated when your opponent draws outside of his/her Draw Phase, and re-word it so you can't activate it every single time they do that. Then, instead of the extra 2 cards every Draw Phase make it so "your opponent draws 4-5 ( doesn't matter which one) cards at the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect"

 

For now, 3/10

 

there's a little detail... that is not a loophole because the hand discarder effect only kicks in when the trap activates.. during the next 3 turns it doesn't reactivate, its already active... :)

[K.B. strategist]

1' date=' not one

1, not a

[b']G[/b]raveyard

replace the comma after Graveyard with a period, and take out the word "then"

Needs some re-wording. Use with this sentence: "During your third Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy this card." instead of what you have now.

 

Completely broken, even without the loophole that lets you discard their hand each time they draw an extra card because of this card's effect. Make it so it can only be activated when your opponent draws outside of his/her Draw Phase, and re-word it so you can't activate it every single time they do that. Then, instead of the extra 2 cards every Draw Phase make it so "your opponent draws 4-5 ( doesn't matter which one) cards at the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect"

 

For now, 3/10

 

there's a little detail... that is not a loophole because the hand discarder effect only kicks in when the trap activates.. during the next 3 turns it doesn't reactivate, its already active... :)

 

I'm pretty sure that's a trigger effect (like Ordeal of a Traveler), in which case the effect can be activated every single time they draw a card. :/

[bradthecanivingfootlicker]

Bleh, I know you're a noob, but even I know to make a good card with no TCG errors. And for a second there, you made it sound like your opponent hand was sent to the graveyard. If you catch ma drift. For now--3.111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111/10

[the worm]

Not bad but, it's slightly overpowered. Overall i'd give a 7/10

[Dark Archon]

1' date=' not one

1, not a

[b']G[/b]raveyard

replace the comma after Graveyard with a period, and take out the word "then"

Needs some re-wording. Use with this sentence: "During your third Standby Phase after this card's activation, destroy this card." instead of what you have now.

 

Completely broken, even without the loophole that lets you discard their hand each time they draw an extra card because of this card's effect. Make it so it can only be activated when your opponent draws outside of his/her Draw Phase, and re-word it so you can't activate it every single time they do that. Then, instead of the extra 2 cards every Draw Phase make it so "your opponent draws 4-5 ( doesn't matter which one) cards at the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect"

 

For now, 3/10

but that changes my effect :(

[Tabris]

What K. B. said.

[Sleepy]

This card can only be activated by discarding your opponent's when they draw 1 or more cards. After activation, your opponent can draw 2 extra cards during each of his/her Draw Phases. This card is destroyed after your opponent's 3rd Standby Phase after activation.

 

would that make any change to the loophole and balanse the card a little? what do you think?