Parting Shot Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 [align=center]Well, I was challenged, so I couldn't help but accept :P Here are the entries: [spoiler=[b]DeMeNTeD[/b]][spoiler=[b]Dark Aura Dragon-Lion[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 Dragon or Beast-Type monster you control. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to flip this card into face-down Defense Position. This card cannot be flipped face-up except by it's own effect. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can flip this card face-up and activate the following effect: This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the DEF of the monster you removed from play to Summon this card until the End Phase. [spoiler=[b]Dragon-Lion Adversarial Absorption Armor[/b]]This card is also treated as an Equip Spell Card. This card can only be equipped to a "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" you control. The equipped monster gains 100 ATK and DEF each time it destroys a monster by battle. During your Main Phase 1, if the equipped monster's ATK is 2500 or more, you can unequip this card and Special Summon it; it is treated as a Union Monster Card (Rock-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1500). (The ATK of "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" is treated as 2500.) Once per turn, you can treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to a "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" you control, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position with this effect: This card gains 100 ATK for each monster in your Graveyard. If a "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" you control is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls, you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand to negate the activation of the Spell or Trap Card controlled by your opponent and return it to his/her hand. This effect can only be used once per turn. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) (This card is still treated as a Spell Card.) [spoiler=[b]Unleashed Lion Demonization[/b]]This card can only be activated if a "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" you control, equipped with "Dragon-Lion Adversarial Absorption Armor", is destroyed by battle. Return all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to the owner's hands (except this card). Remove from play "Dragon-Lion Adversarial Absorption Armor" in your Graveyard and Special Summon "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" from your Graveyard to your field in face-up Attack Position. It's original ATK is doubled and it's DEF is treated as 0. The effects of "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion" are negated. Change control of all monsters you control to your opponent, except "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion". All Spell & Trap Card Zones your opponent controls are also treated as Monster Card Zones until the End Phase of the turn this card was activated. All monsters your opponent controls must attack "Dark Aura Dragon-Lion". All Battle Damage inflicted to both players this turn is treated as 0. During the End Phase, both players lose Life Points equal to the combined Level of all monsters destroyed by battle this turn x 100. [spoiler=[b]Darth Browarod[/b]]Artist Credit: Planet Renders and DA (for the glyph brushes) Poll will run for 48 hours (2 days). Only poll votes will count, so remember to vote ;). Winner after 2 days will receive 3 +reps from the other participant.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Dementeds cards looks they are trying way too hard. So many effects on 1 card can be Overkill. Darth has kept it more simple with a Triple Triad, but I just like how interesting the effects are. +1 Darth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 My vote goes to Darth Browarod. DeMeNTeD's Spell Card's negation effect is useless basically because your opponent can play the card that was returned to their hand again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 This is a giant battle o.O But, I sadly, go with Darth. I've never seen ANY of Darth's card b4 lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Awesome, we have some votes already. Let's keep it coming :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I have to vote for Darth on this one. I love everything about DeMeNTeD's first card but the Spell doesn't make much sicne to me. I love all one Darth's cards and the effect is perfect as far as I know. +1 for Darth. Woo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 i vote for darth because the effects are simple and straight forward lol first time i saw D.B cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I use "Better Cards" to give Darth Broaward +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Darth Browarod Has got My Vote.Demented has gone deep into his cards, DB is more simple.+1 Darth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Darth,since I don't like long-complicated effects, also, monsters effects cannot be activated while in face-down, so I think demented's effect is wrong somehow :?sorry demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 For once I am not voting for DeMeNTeD, I go with Darth. I hate long, complicated effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I will have to go with Darth. DeMeNTeD I feel you overdid the effects of the last two cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 monsters effects cannot be activated while in face-down' date=' so I think demented's effect is wrong somehow :?[/quote'] Actually they can. Just look at Big Shield Gardna. As for my Vote. It has to go to Browarod. DeMeNTeD just overdid his cards way too much in terms of effects. Browarod's cards are much more simple yet not overpowered not that I'm saying DeMeNTeD's cards are overpowered or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 As usual Demented has kinda overdone his effect. I go with Darth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbon V3 Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Darth get my vote becouse he has better effects and Pics.Darth cards is much simler of DeMeNTeDs cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I'll rate each card separately. Darth[spoiler=Magician of Hope]Originality: 25/25 Balance: 15/25 (This effect is heavily abusable. I'd add a maximum limit of Hope Counters it can hold, else you can easily get a chain of recruiters to gain draws.)OCG: 19/20 (remove 2 Hope Counters from this card)Pic: 15/15Personal opinion: 11/15Total: 85/100 [spoiler=Magician's Prism]Originality: 20/25 Balance: 25/25 OCG: 20/20 Pic: 15/15Personal opinion: 15/15Total: 100/100 [spoiler=Shattered Reality]Originality: 10/25 Balance: 0/25 (I do not like them, Sam I am.)OCG: 13/20 (The issue here is that "Magician of Hope" is not required for "Magician's Prism to be on the field, so for example with the last sentence you shouldn't word it like it is. Maybe something like: Switch control of all monster you control (except "Magician of Hope") with all monsters your opponent controls. (If there are not enough available Monster Card Zones, you select which of your opponent's monsters to change control.)It's not perfect, but you get the idea.Pic: 10/15Personal opinion: 5/15 (It is an overpowered card to me, the holo is meh.)Total: 38/100 Total: 223/300 Demented [spoiler=Dark Aura Dragon-Lion]Originality: 20/25 Balance: 25/25 (As a stand-alone card, it's underpowered, but you made support for it.)OCG: 19/20 (its = possessive, it's = "it is") Pic: 12/15Personal opinion: 12/15 (Just 1 comment here, if the "when attacked" effect can only be activated when face-down, you should say when this face-down card is attacked. Other than that, this card is okay.Total: 88/100 [spoiler=Adversarial Absorption Armor]Originality: 20/25 Balance: 25/25 OCG: 20/20 Pic: 10/15Personal opinion: 7/15 (The wording here is clunky, also does it have an effect while equipped by Union, because I didn't see any mentioned.)Total: 83/100 [spoiler=Unleashed Lion Demonization]Originality: 20/25 Balance: 15/25 (Seems overpowered slightly even though the ATK doubling would reset if it flips face-down using its effect.)OCG: 14/20 (to the owner's hands = to their owners' handsIt's original ATK is doubled and it's DEF is treated as 0 = Its original ATK is doubled and its DEF becomes 0. negate the activation of the Spell or Trap Card controlled by your opponent and return it to its owner's hand.Pic: 7/15 (Don't like this one.)Personal opinion: 10/15Total: 66/100 Total: 237/300 So, yeah, I'm going against the trend and voting Demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Argh, hard to choose. I'm going with Darth in this case, Demented overkilled his card's effects. That and I like how Darth's cards play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 In after Darth wins because no one wants to read Demented's effects. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Darth cuz Demented: you have too many effects on 1 card..just too much!Darth gets my vote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 OCG: 19/20 (remove 2 Hope Counters from this card)http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Realm_of_Light OCG: 13/20 (The issue here is that "Magician of Hope" is not required for "Magician's Prism to be on the field' date=' so for example with the last sentence you shouldn't word it like it is. Maybe something like: Switch control of all monster you control (except "Magician of Hope") with all monsters your opponent controls. (If there are not enough available Monster Card Zones, you select which of your opponent's monsters to change control.)It's not perfect, but you get the idea.[/quote']Parentheses are generally used for side or note things like "(You do not use "Polymerization".)". I didn't use them here because they are not used on cards like: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Byroad_Sacrifice . You wouldn't activate Byroad Sacrifice if you didn't have a Cyber Ogre to Special Summon, and you wouldn't use the Magician of Hope part of this effect if you didn't control a Magician of Hope. Also, Dark Magician Girl doesn't use parentheses for Dark Magician in her effect, yet it is possible to not have any in the graveyard. Swamp/Lava Battleguards, any LV monster, parentheses aren't appropriate in cases like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Debrom Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Im voting for Darth Browarod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I will vote for Darth Broward. The cards of DeMeNTeD are not readable on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmarian Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 OCG: 19/20 (remove 2 Hope Counters from this card)http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Realm_of_Light OCG: 13/20 (The issue here is that "Magician of Hope" is not required for "Magician's Prism to be on the field' date=' so for example with the last sentence you shouldn't word it like it is. Maybe something like: Switch control of all monster you control (except "Magician of Hope") with all monsters your opponent controls. (If there are not enough available Monster Card Zones, you select which of your opponent's monsters to change control.)It's not perfect, but you get the idea.[/quote']Parentheses are generally used for side or note things like "(You do not use "Polymerization".)". I didn't use them here because they are not used on cards like: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Byroad_Sacrifice . You wouldn't activate Byroad Sacrifice if you didn't have a Cyber Ogre to Special Summon, and you wouldn't use the Magician of Hope part of this effect if you didn't control a Magician of Hope. Also, Dark Magician Girl doesn't use parentheses for Dark Magician in her effect, yet it is possible to not have any in the graveyard. Swamp/Lava Battleguards, any LV monster, parentheses aren't appropriate in cases like this. Yes, i agree that thing with Hope Counters is not OCG mistake..anyway, just to tell you that your monster will be able to remove 2 Hope Counters FROM ANYWHERE to draw 1....same as Realm of Light could if there was any other card that place Shine Counters...;) And i think Darth Browarod is right about other thing too... Anyway, i must say that you are one of best creators i have seen till now on this forums...mostly because each part of your effects have reason why is there, cards are balanced too and i see some originality ;) I don't need to vote here, i think it is over anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
42.42.564 Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 ^ ;D... playability and flow + creativity in usage. nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 to much to Dementeds card so ill say Darth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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