Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 [align=center]Effect is long so bear with me. Certain parts are messy because of how tired I am...[/align] Effect: This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or flipped face-up. You can add this card to your hand if "Tsukuyomi" is in your hand or on your field. This card's Attribute is also treated as FIRE while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. As long as "Tsukyomi" remains in your Graveyard, this card is not returned to it's controller's hand during the End Phase. When this card destroys a monster, add 1 "Book or Taiyou" to your hand from your Deck. If the Spell Card "Book of Taiyou" is activated while this card is face-up on the field, put 1 Sun Counter on this card (max. 2). If there is a Sun Counter on this card, any Set monsters are flipped face-up during the End Phase. If a monster has a Flip Effect, it is not activated. You can Tribute this card with 2 Sun Counters to return all face-down cards on the field to their controller's hand. If this card is sent to the Gaveyard by battle, add 1 Spirit monster to your hand from your Graveyard. Image: http://fc64.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/120/a/5/Okami_Amaterasu_by_Kaze_Hime.jpg (off of google link) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 It's not that bad OCG, you do have wordy areas though. On the 3rd sentence, you can just say "This card is also treated as a FIRE monster." Simple as that. As long as "Tsukyomi" remains in your Graveyard, this card is not returned to it's controller's hand during the End Phase. As long as "Tsukyomi" remains in your Graveyard, this card does not return to your hand during the End Phase. Overall, it's pretty good. 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 very nice as always, and the name and pic are great. perfect for a spirit. the effect is a little long, but also very interesting and well thought out. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Thanks a lot. Made it for demented's contest so hopefully I'll do well :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 i would think you would. what does the name mean btw? i have an idea, but wanted to be sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 illuminates heaven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 wow, i was pretty off... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Oh well...any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 ummm... well..... its a spirit.... and it can be special summon.... not many spirit cards can do that...honestly......... i didnt understand this cards effect much.... cause theres too many.. and the wording confuses me...pix is a bit plain.................6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Very good 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or flipped face-up. You can add this card (from?) to your hand if "Tsukuyomi" is in your hand or on your field. This card's Attribute is also treated as FIRE while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. As long as "Tsukyomi" remains in your Graveyard, this card is not returned to it's owner's hand during the End Phase. When this card destroys a monster, add 1 "Book or Taiyou" from your Deck to your hand. If the Spell Card "Book of Taiyou" is activated while this card is face-up on the field, put 1 Sun Counter on this card (max. 2). If there is a Sun Counter on this card, any Set monsters are flipped face-up during the End Phase (Flip Effects are negated). You can Tribute this card with 2 Sun Counters to return all face-down cards on the field to their owner's hands. If this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 Spirit monster from your Graveyard to your hand. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I like this card nice work ;) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Thanks a lot sleepy :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 pic could be better a little to complicated of an effect but culid say about 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 It's been a while since I've looked at a long-effect card. Supports with Tsukuyomi, can pull a Book of Taiyou from the Deck? That's epic. Book of Taiyou is old school. The Sun Counter thing is kind of an interesting twist, but I don't exactly see this card patrolling the field and forcing an opponent to Set monsters/cards. The last effect is bad, who likes discarding Spirits? Also, "adding from the hand to the Graveyard" = "discarding." You can ask anyone. Card Destruction discards hands, it does not tell both players to add their hands to their Graveyards then draw a new hand. <_< I'm a fan of the support, but not of the odd effects suited for a powerful field-controlling monster. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 yeah...I'm probably gonna toy around with its effect for a little bit since I just rushed it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Few OCG errors that were already covered. Nice, Spirit monsters FTW! 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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