Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Not much to say here, just here's the card: Effect: When this card is Summoned, you can discard your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 points to select and activate 1 of the following effects:- Destroy all other monsters you control, select 1 card on the field and destroy it.- Destroy all other monsters you control, to increase this cards ATK by the combined monsters Level x100. Picture: http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1517/art01qj0.jpg Thoughts, Comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Your ocg is off... here is a fix... When this card is Summoned, you can discard your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 points to select and activate 1 of the following effects:- Destroy all other monsters you control, select 1 card on the field and destroy it.- Destroy all other monsters you control, to increase this cards ATK by the combined monsters Level x100. that fix probably isn't perfect.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 OCG fix:When this card is Summoned,(note the comma!) you can discard your hand to destroy all Spell & Trap Cards on your opponent's field. Once per turn,(comma) you can pay 1000 Life Points to activate 1 of the following effects: 1- Destroy all other monsters you control. Then, destroy 1 card on the field. 2- Destroy all other monsters you control. Then, increase this card's ATK by the combined Levels of the monsters destroyed by this card's effect x100. you don't need spaces between the effects.you may = you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 *Fixed* Any reviews or coments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 sleepys fix is wrong its not opponents field its your opponent controls also numbers aren't needed in the effect because it isn't going on a number.. also you must go to next line with effects like my fix you just don't need full line of space Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 sleepys fix is wrong its not opponents field its your opponent controls also numbers aren't needed in the effect because it isn't going on a number.. also you must go to next line with effects like my fix you just don't need full line of space your opponent's field = your opponent controls... both are actually used in real cards and its not old OCG... I wouldn't put numbers in there but I don't know how to do those big dots that the multiple-effect cards have your last point... I have to agree with that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Thanks for helping you two=), and can somone please rate? I want to know if I did a decent job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Wow this card lookin' good! And its really destructive too!OCG errors? they're fixed right? I'll rate it 9/10. I like it! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Nice name really, i had a feeling that this card would be cool. Though the first choice effect really is, way to underpowered and negative, destroying ALL your monsters on the field to just destroy one? I don't like that one, Otherwise, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Nice name really' date=' i had a feeling that this card would be cool. Though the first choice effect really is, way to underpowered and negative, destroying ALL your monsters on the field to just destroy one? I don't like that one, Otherwise, 9/10.[/quote']Thats basically when you're desprate, for example your monsters are being torn apart by a big monster with 4000 ATK or around that area and they're all going by-by anyway. Or for really annoying spell and traps.(Level Limit Area B Etc.) If you haven't already taken care of it with the first effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Yes... No really, i don't like that one. You can't change anything about it, i said it is a really good card though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Yeah while as I said it's really only for emergencies. It's not really meant to be used more then once or twice at most Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 The image looks like plain ol Yu Gi Oh monster style, it looks badass! This card would be very expensive if it were a real card, nice going! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 The image looks like plain ol Yu Gi Oh monster style' date=' it looks badass! This card would be very expensive if it were a real card, nice going! 10/10[/quote']Wow! Thanks, that's the highest rating I've ever got!(and from a higher leveled member to!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 The image looks like plain ol Yu Gi Oh monster style' date=' it looks badass! This card would be very expensive if it were a real card, nice going! 10/10[/quote']Wow! Thanks, that's the highest rating I've ever got!(and from a higher leveled member to!) NO! THANK YOU for the awesome creation, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 I'll try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Good Pic And Idea Other Than That Needs Some Work.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Good Pic And Idea Other Than That Needs Some Work.8/10Such as? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Maybe Atk And Def Need A Little Work.Actually Now I Realize Not Much Work Is Needed Sorry.I'll Change My Rating To 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 While thanks for all your reviews! As for you Cove what do you mean decrease the Atk to what 2500 or make the effect only last one turn, something like that? I will continue to work on this card and all my others. I hope you guys will look at my other cards if you ever se them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Great pic, good FIXED OCG, fine effect. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Great pic' date=' good FIXED OCG, fine effect. 8.5/10[/quote']Thanks. The pic is great, im glad I found it. If you have any way to improve the card I'd like to hear it. Also we need a littleor in my case a lot of help once in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Impressive pic, maybe a little too cheap of an effect 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Impressive pic' date=' maybe a little too cheap of an effect 9/10[/quote'] Thanks for the review. Which effect is cheap? the first one? Any suggestions to make more balanced would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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