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[spoiler=Effect of Novice Magician]Each time a Trap card is activated, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponents Life points. Each time a Spell card is activated put 2 Spell counters on this card (Max 6). By Removing any number of counters on this card you can special summon 1 Novice Token for each counter removed. ATK0/DEF0/Level1/Spellcaster/Light. when these tokens are destroyed, inflict 400 Points of damage to your opponents Life points these tokens cannot be used for a Tribute summon.

 

[spoiler=Effect of Mystical Magician of Rebirth]Each time a Spell card is activated special summon 1 Level 2 or lower monster from your graveyard in attack position. Each time a Level 4 or lower monster is destroyed in by battle put 1 Mystical counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell card Special Summon as many Level 3 or lower Spellcaster type monster from your graveyard for each Mystical counter on this card.

 

 

 

if anyone cannot read the effects please tell me and i will post it for you OK

Sorry guys Novice is supposed to be called Novice Magician sorry

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updated

[tommers2008]

ocg errors...

 

4000 Year Old Magician... (card is op'd in my eyes)

 

Summoned capitalize it

 

Counters same here

 

Spell Card and again

 

and it doesn't seem worded right try this (might not be perfect)

 

"When this card is Summoned put 5 Spell Counters on any card on the field. When a Spell Card is activated, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from to field to negate its activation and destroy the card. For every Spell Card destroyed this card gains 400 ATK."

 

Novice

 

Each at the start on the card guess u missed it(not in the written effect do)..

 

Card again after Spell and Trap...

 

opponent's use '

 

Life Points not needed

 

Special Summoned

 

Counters again

 

( use brackets around the stats for token)

 

When right after token stats

 

Mystical Magician of Rebirth

 

same capitalization is needed for words like this

 

Spell Card, Special Summon, Graveyard, Attack Position, Mystical Counter

 

hers a fix for you

 

"Each time a Spell Card is activated Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position. Each time a Level 4 or lower monster is destroyed by battle put 1 Mystical Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card Special Summon as many Level 3 or lower Spellcaster-Type monsters from your Graveyard for each Mystical Counter on this card."

 

 

There's some help for you.. It might not all be perfect but a lot of it is..

 

You have good ideas and great pics so keep trying to improve your ocg and you will be top member soon enough.. 7.5/10 (with fix 9.5/10)

[Nighthawk14]

ocg errors...

 

4000 Year Old Magician... (card is op'd in my eyes)

 

Summoned capitalize it

 

Counters same here

 

Spell Card and again

 

and it doesn't seem worded right try this (might not be perfect)

 

"When this card is Summoned put 5 Spell Counters on any card on the field. When a Spell Card is activated' date=' you can remove 1 Spell Counter from to field to negate its activation and destroy the card. For every Spell Card destroyed this card gains 400 ATK."

 

Novice

 

[b']E[/b]ach at the start on the card guess u missed it(not in the written effect do)..

 

Card again after Spell and Trap...

 

opponent's use '

 

Life Points not needed

 

Special Summoned

 

Counters again

 

( use brackets around the stats for token)

 

When right after token stats

 

Mystical Magician of Rebirth

 

same capitalization is needed for words like this

 

Spell Card, Special Summon, Graveyard, Attack Position, Mystical Counter

 

hers a fix for you

 

"Each time a Spell Card is activated Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position. Each time a Level 4 or lower monster is destroyed by battle put 1 Mystical Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card Special Summon as many Level 3 or lower Spellcaster-Type monsters from your Graveyard for each Mystical Counter on this card."

 

 

There's some help for you.. It might not all be perfect but a lot of it is..

 

You have good ideas and great pics so keep trying to improve your ocg and you will be top member soon enough.. 7.5/10 (with fix 9.5/10)

thanx i guess i should work on my OCG

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Tey iz ok

[Sander]

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