Saturn of Elemia Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Hello everyone. I have another card from ragnarok1945 to present to you. Again going with the Ancient Gear theme, this one is far less overpowering than the previous "Ancient Gear Desolation Mech". Still, this is quite a formidable card in its own right. Let us know what you think:CARD EFFECTThis card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing 3 "Ancient Gear" monsters. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. As long as this card is face-up, negate the effect(s) of your opponent's Effect Monsters. IMAGE CREDIThttp://s349.photobucket.com/albums/q364/SaTuRnPaLaDiN/?action=view¤t=Mech-Crusher.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Um. The other one was better. This one is too unplayable because of the summoning conditions. Maybe make it a Nomi instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 OCG FIX: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 3 "Ancient Gear" monsters. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effect(s) of your opponent's monsters. For the last sentence, you already depicted that the certain card has an effect, so you don't need "Effect Monsters". I like your other card better also. More original. The pic is kinda bland, no background. Overall: 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 I'm guessing battletech/mechwarrior on this one... The price is a bit steep... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Thanks for the C&C, guys. For the while, Rag and I are presenting a few of his designs as filler while my new set undergoes development. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing 3 "Ancient Gear" monsters. When this card is Tribute Summoned, it gains the following effect: * When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. As long as this card is face-up, negate the effect(s) of your opponent's Effect Monsters. I win, in ways few know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Pic need a better BG than a simple black color. Some OCG errorz. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Er, Saturn, why do you keep posting ragnarok's cards? Can't he post them himself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 There are minor errors, such as Tributing should be capitilised, though I think they have been mentioned. A BG would be nice, though images are not the most essential thing. Though it's not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Take out the 50's in the ATK/DEF, I don't like the pic much, I guess it's the black background, capitalize tributing, good to see you kept the no Spell or Trap Card effect that makes it a "Ancient Gear" monster. 7.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing 3 "Ancient Gear" monsters. When this card is Tribute Summoned' date=' it gains the following effect: * When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. As long as this card is face-up, negate the effect(s) of your opponent's Effect Monsters.[/i'] I fuckin' win, in ways few know. Somebody take notice: the card as is is insipid - and more. Here's a way out of mediocrity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Tabris' idea is funny, but then you still have the potential of a Special Summonable 3750 monster with no downsides (or upsides, but 3750 is big) at all. So that's wrong. As for this, it's relatively balanced. Having to Tribute Summon it with 3 Ancient Gears is (in most cases) going to take a lot of commitment to the field, unless you're the man and you Machine Duplicate "Ancient Gear" to get your Tribute fodder. I think that even with this wording, Geartown lowers its necessary amount of Tributes by 1. So that's something to consider. The typical Ancient Gear Spell/Trap lock is there, but a Plasma effect? Really? This thing is really big. He's locking down any Spells or Traps that could hurt him in the Battle Phase, and stopping other monsters your opponent might have at the same time. Just about nothing can run him over in battle, so that option is practically moot. It puts a lot of pressure on the opponent to draw something that can wipe out Ancient Gear Big Kimbo over here. But when they get rid of it, it's a big hit to you, since you had to spend 3 cards to get it out. So, it sort of balances itself out when its gone off the field, if that manages to happen before you pummel your opponent to death for the win. Good card, it seems broken but it really isn't that crazy. It just promotes fewer ways to get rid of it. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 OCG, and no background. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Tabris' idea is funny, but then you still have the potential of a Special Summonable 3750 monster with no downsides (or upsides, but 3750 is big) at all. So that's wrong. So what? It isn't as if you're goin' to Special Summon it (and, as we know all too well, Gadjiltron Dragon or whatever that Gear's called is far better at that particular moment). Care to tell me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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