Ayecaptain1 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 This is my first shot at making a card; constructive criticism appreciated. Description: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Synchro Summoned by Tributing one Stardust Dragon, Black Rose Dragon and Rainbow Dragon on your side of the field.This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Rainbow Dragon in the Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for every Black Rose Dragon in the Graveyard. This card gains 400 DEF for every Stardust Dragon in your Graveyard.You may give up 500 Life Points to negate an attack to this card. Image sources: http://www.coolbuddy.com/wallpapers/abstract/dragon/Dragon_home.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Not a synchro.Don't like pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Bad pic! Bad OCG! It should be an Effect Monster! 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 It actually seems underpowered if you look at the cost. Image needs a background and as stated, it should be an effect monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Massively Underpowered.Either one of the monsters used in it, are better than this thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Massively Underpowered.Either one of the monsters used in it' date=' are better than this thing.[/quote'] I agree. To have to sacrifice such powerful monsters for the Summon of this card, you would expect a much more powerful effect...not to mention higher ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 For a newbie, nice... 8/10. Nice idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Good try but this card has to have those synchro materials like a Fusion monster card. Not only that but you try to sacrifice 3 of the best synchro monsters in Yugioh and you summon this card. Give it more ATK and a extremely better effect. I like the picture too so nice try. Score: 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siameseee Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 what the?WRONG IMAGE!TINY LETTERS!Sorry, but 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 This is not a synchro. Its just a normal effect card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 This. This is wrong:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Synchro Summoned by Tributing one Stardust Dragon, Black Rose Dragon and Rainbow Dragon on your side of the field.This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Rainbow Dragon in the Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for every Black Rose Dragon in the Graveyard. This card gains 400 DEF for every Stardust Dragon in your Graveyard.You may give up 500 Life Points to negate an attack to this card. This is right:1 Tuner + 1 or more non Tuner-Type monsters.This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each "Rainbow Dragon" in either players' Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for every "Black Rose Dragon" in either players' Graveyard. This card gains 400 DEF for every "Stardust Dragon" in your Graveyard. If this card is attacked, pay 500 Life Points to negate the attack of that card. What I fixed:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Synchro Summoned, and so on. (When It's a white card [synchro] then you either put [EXAMPLE:] "Junk Warrior" + 1 or more non Tuner-Type monsters. [Thats when you want 1 monster that is used to synchro summoned.] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non Tuner-Type monsters. [When ou just want a regular sychro.] NOT what you wrote. Rainbow Dragon, and the other monsters you mentioned = (Put " at the beggining and end of a card when you state it in the effect.] Everyting else I mentioned in fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 the cost to summon this card is far too high and its boosting ability is far too low 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 there are some things I wanted to say about this card, but sinse everyone has said those things, I'll go ahead and say something else for the card:) your card is breaking the rulez for synchros, stardust+ rainbow+ blackrose are equal to 25 stars, there's no way this card can be a synchro and on top of that, it doesn't have a tuner, I suggest making it an effect monster instead of a synchro, also, I would understand stardust and blackrose, but rainbow has nothing to do with them. sorry but I don't see how this card would see any play at all.with those things as payments, this card should win you the duel or something.....the effect is kinda..............................................................................................................................................bad.......................................................................................^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sakib16 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 well yes kind of like everyone else said getting all 3 of those cards on the field is kinda.............................almost impossible and the effect should be much better for a card like that and rainbow dragon has nothing to do with yu-gi-oh 5d's at all plus theres no tuners so score : 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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