ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Here it is. I was inspired by a newbie's attempt at Kakashi and Obito. Pic from Google images. A bit of old OCG here and there. "Late Again" coming soon. [spoiler=Card Lore:]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Late Again". You must also Tribute Monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more from the field or your hand. Once per turn, choose one Effect Monster your opponent controls. This card gains the effect of the chosen Monster. This card is not effected by Trap Cards. Once per turn, instead of attacking, if this card is equipped with "Mangekyou Sharingan Eye", you can choose one Monster your opponet controls. Remove the chosen Monster from play for 3 turns. At the end of 3 turns, the chosen Monster is returned to your opponent's hand, and this card is switched to Defense Position. If this card is switched to Defense Position by this effect, it cannot attack or change positions for 2 turns. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon one FIRE monster with Level Stars equalling 4 or less from your hand. [spoiler=IMG credit]Copy Ninja-http://galeon.hispavista.com/nrgame/img/Kakashi.jpgEarth Style-wherever DemonX got itChidori-http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_tXMcIslnL_s/RgCvIE2XwjI/AAAAAAAAAF0/0AD2GAWbMiw/s320/Kakashi_vs_Zabuza__CHIDORI_by_Sharingan_Girl.jpgMangekyou Eye-http://www.daviddallas.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/kakashi_mangekyou_sharingan.jpgLate-http://www.narutohurricane.com/narutoblog/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/andthecrowdgoeswild.jpgThousand Yrs-http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c46/kakashidiot/c56da4fc.pngParadise-http://www.freewebs.com/narutofansiteno1/kakashi%2035.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 2 cards added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Drop the ANIME and move on.2/10 because only the first pic is decent-ish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Well, Kakashiis my favoreite character of all ANIME as I know it, aside from maybe DBZ's Gohan, and I couldn't live knowing I didn't make a good, non-n00by attempt at him. With the pics, you have no idea. There are 0 pics of headhunter jutsu, so I had to use that. The best lightning blade pic was what I already used in Kakashi's card, and with Sharingan, I got lazy okay? (I'tll get better later) Did you ever even watch/read Naruto!? And I did this mainly to show my unique view of Kakashi. These aren't banned yet, so I don't care how overused they are. I usually stay away from anime anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 yo Ironmanben is this a good pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Yes, yes, exactly what I wanted! Thank you. 20 points coming your way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 I know Kakashi's FIRE because of the Land of Fire, but his main element is Lightning, so he should be LIGHT. Also, don't make up types like Jonin. For Kakashi's Chidori and Sharingan Eye, it's "Equip only to a "Kakashi" monster. Sharingan Eye needs to reflect Kakashi's alias "The Copy Ninja". Oh yes, I forgot to mention that you need image credit. Overall, I'd say a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 I know Kakashi's FIRE because of the Land of Fire' date=' but his main element is Lightning, so he should be LIGHT. Also, don't make up types like Jonin.[/quote'] Its not a fake type, its a sub-type. That's different, or so I've heard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Yes, it's a sub-Type, but Rituals, Fusions, and Synchro's almost never have a sub-type naturally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Cards edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Kamui is supposed to send things to an alternate dimension. In Yugioh terms, that would mean removing from play. Furthermore, using it caused Kakashi to be bedridden for a week, so Kakashi shouldn't be able to attack for 1-3 turns after using it. Mangekyo would be more useful if the effect differed with the monster it's equipped to. I would say:"Equip only to an "Uchiha" or "Kakashi" monster." The effect of the Mangekyo would be in the actual monster, saying:"If this card is equipped with "Mangekyo Sharingan", {Insert effect here}." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Well since each Uchiha and Kakashi all have different Sharingans, I made an individual one for Kakashi. The remove-from-play part I will add. The being bedridden for weeks part was originally supposed to be the subtracting 200 DEF, but I will add the other part, too.In the effect of the monster, of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Alright, since it's now equippable to both Uchiha and Kakashi, change the name. Sorry if I'm sounding bossy or anything btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Cards updated. Its okay that your being bossy. You're helping me make my cards better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Yes' date=' yes, exactly what I wanted! Thank you. 20 points coming your way.[/quote'] thanks, any time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 A few card added. MO-Paradise can be equipped to all Warriors because anyone can read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Very good, but some errors with capitalization (monster = Monster, atk = ATK, etc). Although, I disagree with the sending to another dimension forcing Kakashi to bed for a week. You obviously haven't seen the recent RAW (pretty sad, actually). Kakashi can now use in multiple times in quick succession. Personally, I'd make it an effect of the Mangekyo Sharingan, or perhaps another Card entirely (Quick-Play Magic?).The Sharingan literally means Copy Wheel Eye, I get that, but do you have any idea how OP an effect that copies over effects is? All he has to do is copy Jinzo's effect (or Stardust Dragon's or hell, even Red Dragon Archfiend. Really scary thought after getting powered up by Lightning Blade. Even more scary is Chaos Emperor Dragon's.) and then remove Monsters from play/slaughter everything. Realistically, Kakashi should be at least 9 or 10 stars thanks to that effect.Issue with Lightning Edge, its permanent after the charge up time. Kakashi has never, ever shown the ability to use Lightning Edge indefinitely. You really need to add some extra downtime or something. An effect like that can make Great Maju Gazzet look pretty damn weak. Sure, two more turns charge up time, but Maju Gazzet can only be summoned once, or he's got 0 ATK.That said, feel free to ignore me. I'm not sure how far along in time this Kakashi is. I'm only making suggestions, although I stand by Kakashi getting his level raised. It's too low for a Monster that has an effect better then some 10 Stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Great Maju Garzett (sp?) is already fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Very good' date=' but some errors with capitalization (monster = Monster, atk = ATK, etc). Although, I disagree with the sending to another dimension forcing Kakashi to bed for a week. You obviously haven't seen the recent RAW (pretty sad, actually). Kakashi can now use in multiple times in quick succession. Personally, I'd make it an effect of the Mangekyo Sharingan, or perhaps another Card entirely (Quick-Play Magic?).The Sharingan literally means Copy Wheel Eye, I get that, but do you have any idea how OP an effect that copies over effects is? All he has to do is copy Jinzo's effect (or Stardust Dragon's or hell, even Red Dragon Archfiend. Really scary thought after getting powered up by Lightning Blade. Even more scary is Chaos Emperor Dragon's.) and then remove Monsters from play/slaughter everything. Realistically, Kakashi should be at least 9 or 10 stars thanks to that effect.Issue with Lightning Edge, its permanent after the charge up time. Kakashi has never, ever shown the ability to use Lightning Edge indefinitely. You really need to add some extra downtime or something. An effect like that can make Great Maju Gazzet look pretty damn weak. Sure, two more turns charge up time, but Maju Gazzet can only be summoned once, or he's got 0 ATK.That said, feel free to ignore me. I'm not sure how far along in time this Kakashi is. I'm only making suggestions, although I stand by Kakashi getting his level raised. It's too low for a Monster that has an effect better then some 10 Stars.[/quote'] I've been a little behind on my manga lately. Perhaps another card for the new effect would be good, when I make a series 2. I'm done with this one. You have a good point, with raising Kakashi about 2 stars. U, know, not everyone would have lightning Blade in their deck. And yes, I just realized my errors with that 2. But u' know what? I'm done here, after I fix my errors.I added 3 Level Stars to kakashi and made Lightning blade less powerful. Also changed some OCG errors in K's effect, and made the ritual adapted to 10 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Your cards are good, great work Im a fan of Kakashi and i like this mini set. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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