∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Card Lore:You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you are in control of a FIRE monster on your field with a lower DEF than this card. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, select 1 WATER monster from your opponent's field and remove them from play. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play, when this card is removed from play, your opponent can Special Summon the 1 WATER monster that you removed with this card's effect. Image Credit:DeviantART Please Give Feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andre007 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 lolthe first option is supposed to say "Cards" not "Cars"And thanks for Feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 There is quite a few grammatical and OCG errors(Im bad at fixing them). Result of battle=by battle Being able to select it from the hand and the field is overpowered. Make it only able to select them on the field. Special Summoning from the Deck... I don't know of a single card that can Special Summon itself from the Deck with its own effect, because the player would have to simply remember to play it from their deck, and that would just cause confusion. This effect is super overpowered, basically i cud just normal summon a FIRE and then just special summon him. If its gonna be able to remove 2 WATERs from the field, lower its ATK to like 1900 or something, srsly. Overall4/10 Majorly overpowered, Many OCG and Grammar errors, non "Yugiohish" picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 There I changed it, but that picture is awesome, so im not changing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Remove the special summon from Deck part. It should just be the hand. Adding hand and deck just made it more overpowered. The atk and def seems balanced now. But since the effect and stats are watered down now(lol)I would make him a Level 6. less=lower Its a decent card. Its basically just a Goka, The Pyre Of Malice with a different effect and lower stats. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol seriously I came up with this card on my own XDLol UpdatedBump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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I Hate Snatch Steal Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Your in the auto manufacturing business? Just kidding! Nice card, somewhat bad OCG. I could still under stand it, which is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 1. I dont understand that joke2. If there are OCG errors, tell me what they are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 1. I dont understand that joke2. If there are OCG errors' date=' tell me what they are[/quote'] The joke was in reference to the typo on your poll: "AWSOME! Make more Cars Please!" You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control a FIRE monster on your field with lower DEF than this card. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, select 1 WATER monster from your opponent's field and remove it from play. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play, when this card is removed from play, your opponent can Special Summon the 1 WATER monster that you removed from play with this card's effect. Fixed for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Periods are your friend, not commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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