.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Well, I really like my char´s theme, but I just found out that the vid with it has been disabled!:( I will send you a new URL with the same song, if it is ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Yeah, go ahead lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Here it is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BYu3jZt-Nk The vid is made by me on my account!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 I changed it for you lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Thanks! Did you like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Yeah lol. I'll have her get better as well. I'm mad though! I have the 3rd chapter like 4 pages in, my longest chapter yet.. I go to the bathroom and my sister shut down word without saving it! So yeah, I'm a little pissed about that.. And since I worked today.. It'll probably be posted tomorrow.. Hopefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 =D Me likey. I could suggest a char. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 If you'd like, you may. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Is chapter 3 up soon?(Despite your sister being an a$$hole) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Actually, last night I started remaking it. It's different but still half way descent. This chapter will be longer as well. I'm on about 2 and a half pages. My average will be 6 to 7 for now on. So it will be a little bit of time. Especially since I am going to Tennis practice in like 15 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 WARNING WARNING CHALLENGER APPROACHING Name: Dominic Kiryu Gender: Male Age: 14 3/4 Appearance: [IMG]http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii212/victoria11111111111/l_17446a14527d0965c98cdcecf2091503.jpg[/IMG] Personality: Often sarcastic and funny. When it comes to battle, he is very headstrong, employing tactics only when he really needs to. He despises losing, but won't act like a sore loser. Alignment: Good but then eventually becomes evil Relationship with Main Character: Close friend and or rival About the Pokémon: Dominic was hiking in some mountains one day, when he heard a squeal. He looked around and spotted a Cyndaquil stuck in between some rocks. With much effort, he removed it from the rocks and soon became close friends. Theme Song: Good: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5TNK-TvIcI Evil: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZvZxxE9OX0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Actually, this is perfect for my plot. I will have to add him around chapter 4. But yes. You will love this switching to evil part because of what the evil people are like.Double Post: He won't go evil until about chapter 20, just a warning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Sweet. Btw, his current roster issssssssssss CyndaquilSphinxCroagunkGible He also has a Stunky, but he doesn't use it in battle much. ;D Just to provide a little challenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Well, the rosters I was gonna do myself for the FanFic, but I guess this one will be fine. I'm gonna make the Gible the Pokemon he found in the "Rocks" because it is a very Rare Pokemon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. That ruins the whole starter thing. But fine, it's good with me. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Impressive work. Your descriptions of the battle were engrossing and spot on. I also liked the idea of the PDA being able to translate Pokemon speech. The only thing I didn't like was how quickly Fuji and Stephanie began travelling together. It would normally take a lot more than a single chance meeting in the forest.I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this one though, keep up the great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Thank you so much. And I did jump quickly on the friendship, but trust me. Everything will be with precision and detail. I just used something that happens in Anime A LOT. Quick friendships is just that. Wait until further along the line, you guys are gonna start seeing why I HAD to rate this PG-16. And it's not sexual either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Violence? =D Violence in a Pokemon fic, lovely. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Oh, it's so much more than violence you have to worry about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 *gasp* Will someone die?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 It's all a secret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 This will be good. =D Very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 If only I could find the time to write the third one. I keep doing little by little. As you guys probably noticed.. I try and put as much detail in there actions as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Of course, don't go overboard into detail ether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 You guys have seen my detail. I used to do a Pokemon roleplaying site, but it got too easy lol. That's why I'm making the FanFic in the first place. Something new to do with something I love lmao. I don't know if you noticed, but this is more of a Pokemon Game FanFic than the show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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