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Pokemon FanFic // Rated PG-16 [Chapter 3 Released]


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This is a sweet fanfic! Mine is similar to yours in the aspect that it has the elements of a

regular pokemon journey with a big twist. I like the way your being secretive, so far I would have only rated this PG-13 for Fuji's rival's language (forgot his name). I also think the frendship was a bit rushed, but they had already met. Other than that, I really like it. I'm excited about chapter 3!

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Well, Chapter two is nice. Perhaps a little too friendly with a random stranger met in the woods... But perhaps that is just his character. Wonder if he'll learn the hard way about that, or will all villains knock on the door with an iron fist?

 

Perhaps too sudden, but room to use it to your advantage. Good job!

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