pls rate

[noroldir]

my first card

 

 

 

 

Im not sure about the end of the effect i might of mis orginized the end of effect if i did tell me so i can fix pls.

[Hexanort]

Ocg help:

Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Fiend-Type monster on the field. When this effect is activated, this card is swicthed to Defense Position until the End Phase of the effect is activated.

 

The effect is decent and kinda pointless, so i give you 6.8/10

[~Kefka~]

the pic ain't to bad, but it could have a better effect then that, a few oCG error's but then again who doesn't have em? balanced ATK/DEF and level.......

 

for your first card, 8.6/10

 

i'll be watching for more of your cards, keep up the good work

[noroldir]

there fixed and il switch effect later.

 

[Sleepy]

Ocg help:

Once per turn' date=' you can destroy 1 Fiend-Type monster on the field. [b']Then, switch this card to Defense Position.[/b]

 

 

Fixed ;)

 

but I recomend that you take out that last effect. Fiend-Type monsters are not as powerful as other Types of Decks so I'm not sure of that drawback..

so.. take that out and add something else ;) (again, this is just a recomendation.)

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

You could make it destroy Fiends in the hand. While it may not sound awesome, it would be great in a Darkworld deck.