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Name/Type:Name is a bit too generic

Level and Stats:fine

Picture: The picture is out of proportion (white in the corner). Also, it's a bad drawing, which looks poor and effortless. If you are not a master of drawing, please don't make your own image

Sub-Detail:fine

Type and Effect: minor OCG errors, e.g.: can't= cannot

The effect is too cheap! Seriously, you win? That's too overpowered.

 

Overall: Okay, but your main flaws are the picture and the effect. Find a good picture for the monster (or draw a much better picture), and definitely nerf the effect.

3/10

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Name/Type:Name is a bit too generic

Level and Stats:fine

Picture: The picture is out of proportion (white in the corner). Also' date=' it's a bad drawing, which looks poor and effortless. If you are not a master of drawing, please don't make your own image

[b']Sub-Detail:[/b]fine

Type and Effect: minor OCG errors, e.g.: can't= cannot

The effect is too cheap! Seriously, you win? That's too overpowered.

 

Overall: Okay, but your main flaws are the picture and the effect. Find a good picture for the monster (or draw a much better picture), and definitely nerf the effect.

3/10

 

 

 

 

 

I think this guy is being mean to every one

he gave my hand drawn card a 3/10

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but i do agree that its over powered

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anthony.tharpe, I believe that i've never reviewed any card you've made a drawing of. And I am not being mean, since I am only advising you about what you should do to improve. Ignore what I have to say if you want, but i'm only trying to make your cards even better.

 

And do not post your own cards in someone else's thread.

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Name/Type:Name is a bit too generic

Level and Stats:fine

Picture: The picture is out of proportion (white in the corner). Also' date=' it's a bad drawing, which looks poor and effortless. If you are not a master of drawing, please don't make your own image

[b']Sub-Detail:[/b]fine

Type and Effect: minor OCG errors, e.g.: can't= cannot

The effect is too cheap! Seriously, you win? That's too overpowered.

 

Overall: Okay, but your main flaws are the picture and the effect. Find a good picture for the monster (or draw a much better picture), and definitely nerf the effect.

3/10

 

 

 

 

 

I think this guy is being mean to every one

he gave my hand drawn card a 3/10

213818.jpg

but i do agree that its over powered

Yes it is OP'ed but hard to Summon you must tribute one warrior type FUSION monster.

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anthony.tharpe' date=' I believe that i've never reviewed any card you've made a drawing of. And I am not being mean, since I am only advising you about what you should do to improve. Ignore what I have to say if you want, but i'm only trying to make your cards even better.

 

And do not post your own cards in someone else's thread.

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if so i appologize for confusing you with other people

 

there are so many people on this site its not funny

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the effect kinda confuses me O_o plz tell me if

the effect means that when you attack directly with this card, your opponent instantly has 0 Life Points regardless of how much damage did he/she actually took from that battle..

OR

,, if the effect only says that the effect wins you the duel when this card reduces your opponent's LP to 0 by attacking directly (if its the second effect I said, then this card is just a vanilla).

or you meant it to be like "Victory Dragon" and win the match (the outcome of 3 duels)

 

based on your response to this I'll correct OCG :)

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the effect kinda confuses me O_o plz tell me if

the effect means that when you attack directly with this card' date=' your opponent instantly has 0 Life Points regardless of how much damage did he/she actually took from that battle..

OR

,, if the effect only says that the effect wins you the duel when this card reduces your opponent's LP to 0 by attacking directly (if its the second effect I said, then this card is just a vanilla).

or you meant it to be like "Victory Dragon" and win the match (the outcome of 3 duels)

 

based on your response to this I'll correct OCG :)

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victory dragon

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.

that's the first part. Now for the rest, you'll have to select 1 of the following 3:

1-

This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Tributing 1 Warrior-Type Fusion monster you control. (this one if you want it to be a nomi, this way, you won't be able to summone it in any other way, EVER. not even monster reborn or anything like that even if you summoned correctly first.)

2-

This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Warrior-Type Fusion monster you control. (a semi-nomi. this one if you have to match the conditions first but want to be able to Special Summon it later if it gets destroyed and you summoned properly first)

3-

You can Special Summon this card (do you want it from your hand? from your Graveyard? from your hand or Graveyard?) by Tributing 1 Warrior-Type monster you control. (this one if you want it to be Special Summoned by any means and just can't be normal summoned ;) [not recomended if you are doing a V-Dragon-Type of card]. if you choose this one, you will have to remove the "or Set" part of the first sentense.

 

If this card attacks your opponent directly and reduces their Life Points to 0, you win the Match

(this effect was copy/pasted from Victory Dragon in wikipedia :) you have to say Match, not duel if you want it to be like victory. or if you want it to have an effect at all because if you win the duel by attaking directly and reducing LP to 0. without this effect under regular conditions you win anyways..)

 

just choose what the summoning conditions you want to have and assemble the effect and you are all set :)

pic is not that great, but keep practicing and we'll see what happens..

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This card seems very overpowered, and the summoning conditions are too easy...

so...

2/10

 

Maybe if you made the summoning conditions a bit harder... also about 3 ocg errors.

 

 

And I don't think you guys understand victory dragon's effect that much, some tournaments are 2/3 duels, if you win the first duel with Victory Dragon, then it would have been a 1/1 win. Match is 3 duels.

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