Windowlicker Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 [spoiler=Effect]Once per turn you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 points damage to your opponent. Image found on Google Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyTank Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 1.Apply, not aply2.2000 ATK and no tributes AND cannot be destroyed by battle?3.Nice picOverall 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Fixed. Thanks for the review! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehking Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 I think this card is awesome! Nice pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 You don't need the "Life Points" at the end of the card. Inflict damage to your opponent. ;) Archfiend support? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Great idea. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Once per turn, pay 500 Life Points or destroy this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally). Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 damage to your opponent. The last sentence was previewsly:inflict 800 points of Direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. (it doesn't die by battle, it destroys 1 monster each turn, and if sent to the Graveyard, your opponent takes damage......hmmm... something doesn't look right. Pay 500 to keep it and 1000 for its second effect...its not a big price for its effect and you are not actually loosing card advantage. maybe only destroy face-up monsters? and not being able to attack if you use that effect that turn?....) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Card updated. Thanks for review! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexkaal Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 I don't like the picture.OCG 9/10picture 5/10idea 8/10 Total: 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brisinger39 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Pic is AWESOME, effect not so awesome. still a 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 nice card...9/10...you forgot the image credit...peace... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 OCG is correctPic is goodSeems slightly op'd? maybe it's just me.7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 O`P 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 What could I change to stop it being op'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fake Apology Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The card as it is now is perfect. What do you mean by 'op'd' by the way? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The card as it is now is perfect. What do you mean by 'op'd' by the way? Im not completely sure what it means myself. I think it means overpowered, but thats just a wild guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fake Apology Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The stats are just fine. Just up the defense power to 1800 and it should be balanced.;)Also, give image credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Final update.All problems solved.All grammar corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 umm.... you can only BUMP a Thread every 24+ Hours .___. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Sorry... will delete. This clock of mine is really messed up. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 xD ok No Problem ;) .__. (now I'll just leave, I think I don't have anything to say and am just spamming ^-^" ) by the way, your card looks alot better (for some reason its not the pic I remember) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rafa614 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 cool card!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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