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I like it. To help you with the flames. Don't think of them as a design, because from what I can see here it looks like they are pretty symetrical. Think of them as alive. The fire is going to be all over the place. So if you really are trying fro this, try adding more flames in front of the main object in this case the girl. Remember that the flames are not a design, but a part of the picture, make it so that the viewer feels the heat. Of course we know that is not going to be the case. I am just trying to add more of a dramatic effect there.

No comments on second one. It looks really good, so I feel I don't need to help you there.

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It looks great :) but I'll have to agree with Gamekrazy ^-^"

You need those 2 flames in the background to become lots of flames in random directions even covering some of the person in some areas.

The other one I liked it more, I don't know, maybe its just that the girl looks like it was made more for the other drawing. Looks alot more peaceful, like her expresion.

The wings are awesome, althought the background for this one looks too uniform for my taste.

And that line in the bottom, I can't think of anything to say but there's something odd with it ... ........................... >_<" .....don't know..

 

anyways, overall its a pretty good drawing (both versions) but there's always room for improvement ;)

 

better than what I can do since I've never worked outside of the handmade stuff, I have no idea of how difficult are these to do.

 

sorry for not commenting before ^-^", my excuse is in the ALD thread (and I don't visit the showcase section as often)

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