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You'll see the "why" of the Tittle in this card ^-^"

 

its been so long since I last made a Thread, T^T

 

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If you control no monsters' date=' you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can negate 1 attack and gain Life Points equal to the attacking monster's ATK. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card.[/quote']

 

EDIT: almost forgot, pic by me ;) (color pencils & a pen)

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Hey solid card! Simple' date=' but definitely solid. I like it :D

 

But you misspelled "Paralyzer"

 

And nice work on the art too :']

 

Thanks :) I was wondering.. *fixing*

 

This isn't overpowered. Just good. OCG looks fine and great job overall.

 

Thanks for the comment :) comming from you I feel honored ^-^

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Pretty cool, drawing is nice. There might be a way to stop it from looking so much like a drawing tough. Probably check your wording in the 1st sentence after the comma though. I'm sure there's a better way to say it. 8/10

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Pretty cool' date=' drawing is nice. There might be a way to stop it from looking so much like a drawing tough. Probably check your wording in the 1st sentence after the comma though. I'm sure there's a better way to say it. 8/10

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thanks :)

maybe using some program to color it instead of color pencils would help fix that ^-^"

 

is it really so obious that its hand drawn & colored?, maybe is just that I hadn't drawn something in a couple of weeks but when I saw it done I just told myself *its so beautiful :,)* :D

but there's always room for improvement I guess

 

:):):):):):):):lol::):):):):):):):)

 

YAY!!! all good comments so far !

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Great job Sleepy!!!!

20/10!

 

Thanks I guess, I'll take that... I'm not sure what to think of this comment.. I saw your "BEST CARD EVER 20/10" comments everywhere... its kinda repetitive, tell me more or It'll be suspicious...>:D

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The OCG needs minor changes. The first is so that the effect is a multi-trigger (like "Cyber Ogre's" effect) and the second is just a change of phrase. Otherwise, a spectacular job! :mrgreen:

 

If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can negate 1 attack and increase your Life Points equal to the attacking monster's ATK. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card.

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The OCG needs minor changes. The first is so that the effect is a multi-trigger (like "Cyber Ogre's" effect) and the second is just a change of phrase. Otherwise' date=' a spectacular job! :mrgreen:

 

If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, [b']during either player's turn,[/b] you can negate 1 attack and increase your Life Points equal to the attacking monster's ATK. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card.

 

About the "increase" part, I guess is just other way of writting, the "gain" word is newer OCG regarding ATK & DEF but Life Points is something I just assumed and have yet to check.... probably is okay either way ;) thanks.

 

About the "during either player's turn" part, I like it :D *changing*

let's see what people think ^-^

 

EDIT:

 

@everyone interested in answering:

Speaking on rulings, does this card's most recent suggested change say that if your opponent activates, let's say, Mirror Force, and you chain and negate your own attack, would that negate Mirror Force's effect?

If it does (even if it doesn't) is everyone sure this is really balanced? T T"

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Like the artwork! Not very balanced. 5/10 And it can't negate Mirror Force if you negate your own Attack.

 

got it. Thanks, finally someone answered. I was curious since someone mentioned that suggestion of "during either player's turn".. what would people think.. now it is back to the way it was...I like it better that way anyways..

 

does it look better now? improved? alittle? slightly?

in any way, any suggestions? 5/10? how cheap...oh well -_-"

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