~Wright~ Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Hello again. I've fixed the cards with the advice Max Darkness gave me, so here we are! This card card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Wandering Spirit: Generosity" During each of this card controller's End Phases, the other player takes control of this card. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent shows you their hand. You then select one card in your opponent's hand, and add it to your own. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent pays 500 Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is sent to the Graveyard of the original owner, and the original owner Special Summons 1 "Wandering Spirit: Generosity" to this card's controller's side of the field. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Wandering Spirit: Greed" During each of this card controller's End Phases, the other player takes control of this card. During each of your Standby Phases, show your hand to your opponent. Your opponent selects one card in your hand, and adds it to their own. During each of your Standby Phases, both players gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is sent to the Graveyard of the original owner, and the original owner Special Summons 1 "Wandering Spirit: Greed" to this card's controller's side of the field. Thank you! Please rate and critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Hmmm, this is what I think it should be worded as (I may be wrong!) This card cannot be Special Summoned. During each of this card controller's End Phases, the other player takes control of this card. During each of your Standby Phases, both players show their hands to each other. You both select 1 card from each other's hand and add it to your own. During each of your Standby Phases, both players gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is sent to the Graveyard of the original owner, and the original owner Special Summons 1 "Wandering Spirit: Greed and Theft" to this card's controller's side of the field. You sure know how to come up with original effects... 8/10 (simply because it's so bizzare) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Much better, the only problem I have is that: 'one' = '1' That's it. 9.5/10 (Again, because it's so bizzare) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiveds98 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Hello again. I've fixed the cards with the advice Max Darkness gave me' date=' so here we are![img']http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/8011/283337.jpg[/img] This card card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Wandering Spirit: Generosity" During each of this card controller's End Phases, the other player takes control of this card. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent shows you their hand. You then select one card in your opponent's hand, and add it to your own. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent pays 500 Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is sent to the Graveyard of the original owner, and the original owner Special Summons 1 "Wandering Spirit: Generosity" to this card's controller's side of the field. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Wandering Spirit: Greed" During each of this card controller's End Phases, the other player takes control of this card. During each of your Standby Phases, show your hand to your opponent. Your opponent selects one card in your hand, and adds it to their own. During each of your Standby Phases, both players gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, it is sent to the Graveyard of the original owner, and the original owner Special Summons 1 "Wandering Spirit: Greed" to this card's controller's side of the field. Thank you! Please rate and critique. i like those cards can you make more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 9/10 second card is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Nice cards and great OCG. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badmajik Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 not bad at all.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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