Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I remade my Earthbound Immortal and fixed the name/ocg as well as improving the pic...please rate/comment UPDATE: OCG FIXED...AGAIN...LOL [spoiler=Effect]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is Summoned, your opponent cannot activate any card effects. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it gains ATK equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK until your next Standby Phase, and it can attack once again in a row. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 i like the pic ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Official Card Grammar: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is Summoned, your opponent cannot activate any card effects. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, this card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. I think you should lower the original ATK to around 2400 and make it so that if it double attacks, it has to attack an opponent's monster first. To do so, replace "This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase" with "If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row." That should balance it out. 5600 direct damage in a single turn is overpowered. The Set ID's also unrealistic as there's already a RGBT-EN055, Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru. Use a four character prefix that doesn't exist yet and it'll be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Thanks ~P O L A R I S~! I took your advice and fixed the effect/ocg. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 8/10 ocg is good and pic is awesome but is a little over powered ps can i use the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 can i use the pic yes, you may use it...just make sure to credit me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 it's relatively balanced, pic looks awesome 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurokaze Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 it is a good card,nice effect and picture i wish they would have actually done it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 thanks again ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 That would be a kick ass real card, just to tell you. Awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Its pretty nice. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 thanks...^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 beter than last time 9,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Great card from 5d's~~!! Love the pic~~!! My favorite character in 5d's are Aki and Carly~~!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 thanks chizuruotohime! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Pic is great OCG is ok.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 thanks! suggestions for improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 It's a good card and looks awesome: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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