Fen. Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I knew this would be worth the wait. You're yet to disapoint good fellow. Although' date=' if I may be a bit critical for a moment, upon also re-reading the first chapter, this has gone a little down-hill, it's strill brilliant mind you.[/quote'] *sigh* Unfortunatly, yes I do think the same thing. I'm losing my funny touch with this chapter. But this was just to establish plot. Next chapter is the silly wacky job interviews that Haley, Zac, and Claire go through. I promise this time, the update will be faster. Mind you though, this is the longest chapter o far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 -_- not your best chapter but still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 -_- not your best chapter but still good Ok seriously, can SOMEONE tell me why this chapter sucked? Because I thought it was really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Personally I don't see what went wrong with your latest chap, I found it well written and it's long enough, no need to make the future chaps any longer than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Loved it ;D Seems like Claire has improved since last time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 now we wait for her to go back to before........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 Nothing was WRONG with the last chapter, it was fantastic, I'm just saying, in comparison to say chapter one, it was just a little worse in my oppinion. One thing you did in chapter one that I liked was the use of music, the song playing in a place like this sets the scene so aptly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 you know I always wondered if MT could put a link to the music vid or something that he's using for the chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 ^ I would, it's easily possible to slap a few URL tags on songs name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 or at the very least tell us where we can go to download the song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 or at the very least tell us where we can go to download the song What's wrong with Youtube? Anyways, I'm happy you're continueing your fic and will be looking forward to next chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 youtube is too common, besides there are times where my connection fails where I couldn't go there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 -Reads, enjoys the entire fan-fic, (Im)patiently waits for the next chapter to come out- My god, I will keep an eye on this at school, this story is epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 only been 1 week I'm sure MT will have the next chap prepared soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code~Red Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Good fan-fic so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Of course, since school IS starting, we may have to wait longer for everything to stabilize Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 >.< nothing wrong with the chapter its just not my personal favorite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 well it's not like MT could make EVERY chapter outstanding, even the best writers make mistakes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 >.< even if that statement is true i didnt say the chapter wasn't OUTSTANDING i just said it wasnt my favorite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 fine, fine, you know what I mean now let's just wait for MT to update again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtemisFowl Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 I like it acctually. I don't usally read fan fics but this one's pretty good. PLain out awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 yeah, but it's been almost 3 weeks since the last update I hope school isn't killing MT again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Wow, Love it ~MT~. I won't usually post until a new chapters up now, so don't think I'm ditching you! But anyways, wonderful work. Hope to see my character again soon! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 it's been a while, Soul Legacy. Didn't know you still visited this place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 I did, and still do. It is just I am now starting my GCSE's, and I'm having aload of real life problems at the minute. But doesn't matter, the topic of this thread is ~MT's~ writing. Which as always, is superb. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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