Zeaux Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 The picture fits with the effect and name. I liked the effect :D looks like Cyber Dragon but better. Making it not able to Synchro Summon is a nice way to balance it (But it can still use for a Tribute Summon) Rate - 9.2/10 (Nice Job ;)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 The picture fits with the effect and name. I liked the effect :D looks like Cyber Dragon but better. Making it not able to Synchro Summon is a nice way to balance it (But it can still use for a Tribute Summon) Rate - 9.2/10 (Nice Job ;)) Yea I thought because Synchro Summoning is much easier I would limit just that part. I kept it so it can be Tribute Summoned because if you were to run this card it would have to be in a dedicated EARTH Deck. So it wouldn't really be used in something like Monarchs which really relies on splashable tribute fodder. Anyway thanks for the great review, I really appreciate it. I will +REP you when I get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 All REP's have been sent except for anbuman and Halo Ring because they have been banned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 remove draw 1 card effect and then it is perfect 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Like I've said to everybody else who said that. If I remove that it won't even be playable. It would be like The Tricky but, worse and who do you know that runs The Tricky. That was a rhetorical question that's why I ended it with a period. Nobody in their right mind would run The Tricky. Anyway thanks for the review, I truly appreciate it. I will +REP you when I get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 My Fix:If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 1 or more monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand to the field in face-up Attack Position by returning 1 EARTH Monster from your hand to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck and draw 1 card. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster. idea is cool I like it and I like the pic but pic credit... deviantart has a lot of members you should specify wich of 'em is other than that awsome card ^_^ 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Chaos Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 The OCG is good and confusing, so I can't really give any fixes. The pic is cool, and the name kind of fits. I'll give you a 9/10. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 My Fix:If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 1 or more monsters' date=' you can Special Summon this card from your hand to the field in face-up Attack Position by returning 1 EARTH Monster from your hand to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck and draw 1 card. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster. idea is cool I like it and I like the pic but pic credit... deviantart has a lot of members you should specify wich of 'em is other than that awsome card ^_^ 9.9/10[/quote'] I truly appreciate you taking the time to review my card, thank you. Also the OCG could actually be written either way mine is just a little shorter and to the point. Also I updated the image credit to the actual link. Thank you for that as well. I will +REP you when I get the chance. The OCG is good and confusing' date=' so I can't really give any fixes. The pic is cool, and the name kind of fits. I'll give you a 9/10. :D[/quote'] Thanks, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you like it. I will give you +REP when I get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Chaos Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Thank you! I will give you a +rate for being nice to a newbie like me! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 I truly appreciate you taking the time to review my card' date=' thank you. Also the OCG could actually be written either way mine is just a little shorter and to the point. Also I updated the image credit to the actual link. Thank you for that as well. I will +REP you when I get the chance. [/quote'] no prob man and you're right 'bout OCG there are different ways anytime man ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Thank you, I don't look at such simple things like if your a newbie or not. If your nice to people I shouldn't nor should anyone else ever be mean. no prob man and you're right 'bout OCG there are different ways anytime man ^_^ Thanks, your OCG was also correct. I just like the simple way of writing in slightly better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 All REP's have been sent except for Shadow Chaos I still owe you 1 more +REP you will get it by tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macsmack Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 good card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 I'm glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to review my card I truly appreciate it. I will +REP you when I get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 This is a pretty good card, scrap the "Draw 1 card" thing, though. 7.65/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 I don't like repeating myself so I'm just gonna pretty much copy and paste what I said before. Like I've said to everybody else who said remove the draw part. If I remove that it won't even be playable. It would be like The Tricky but, worse and nobody in their right mind would run The Tricky. Anyway thanks for the review, I truly appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Observe my highly scientific calculations: The Tricky has 2000 ATK, and can be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card.Cyber Dragon has 2100 ATK, and can be Special Summoned only when your opponent has a monster and you don't. More difficult to complete, but not requiring usage of your resources.Combining the effects in a monster with Cyber Dragon's stats - a therefore even more difficult condition - is offset by the higher ATK/DEF of said monster.Now we take the leap to the Fiber Dragon. It requires an EARTH monster rather than any card, but allows a draw to make up for this. Lastly, it's a Plant, which is now one of the most competitive types (and, of course, mostly EARTH), so the final effect could be warranted. Personally, I think you could alter the effect from it cannot be used for a Synchro Summon to making it only able to used for a Plant-Type Synchro Monster. A major but minor change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Observe my highly scientific calculations: The Tricky has 2000 ATK' date=' and can be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card.Cyber Dragon has 2100 ATK, and can be Special Summoned only when your opponent has a monster and you don't. More difficult to complete, but not requiring usage of your resources.Combining the effects in a monster with Cyber Dragon's stats - a therefore even more difficult condition - is offset by the higher ATK/DEF of said monster.Now we take the leap to the Fiber Dragon. It requires an EARTH monster rather than any card, but allows a draw to make up for this. Lastly, it's a Plant, which is now one of the most competitive types (and, of course, mostly EARTH), so the final effect could be warranted. Personally, I think you could alter the effect from it cannot be used for a Synchro Summon to making it only able to used for a Plant-Type Synchro Monster. A major but minor change.[/quote'] Very observant and well written post. I'm glad you understand what my intentions were for my card. Its the EARTH version of Cyber Dragon but, still retaining the power of Cyber Dragon just with more of a requirement. I didn't want it to be Synchro Summoned at all only because I want to go away from the Synchro Summoning and keep him a strictly attack beatstick but, still giving him the Tribute Summoning capabilities the original Cyber Dragon had. I also have Fusion Monsters for him as well but, I'm still balancing those out. I also cannot find images for the Fusions that is another reason I didn't post them as well. Anyway I really appreciate the time you took to write a more in depth review on my card, thank you. I will +REP you when I get the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 All +REP's have been sent, sorry for the wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JrockerAngel7 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Nice balance and cool pic. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I'm glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to review my card, I truly appreciate it. +REP has been sent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ksdt Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Nice! Like your trade thread! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Nice! Like your trade thread! Trade thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 10/10 Awesome pic great effect very balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortycal86 Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Thank you for reviewing my card, I truly appreciate it. +REP has been sent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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