chizuruotohime Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 comment and rate~!!! [/center] [spoiler=Effect]Activate when opponent declares attack. Pay 1000 Life Points, remove the attacking monster from play and inflict damage to opponent's Life Points equal to ATK of the removed monster. After you used this card, you cannot conduct Battle Phase in your next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MauMau Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 OCG fix: Remove this card from your hand from play to return 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand nnice imageeffect is simple but effective^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 @mau mau thanks... ill edit the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great&PowerfulTrixie Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 better fix:You can remove from play this card from your Hand to add 1 Spell or Trap from your Graveyard to your Hand. again with simple but effective effects....9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 great card. OCg has been fixed by MauMau. effect is simple but good. pic is very good 97.510 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 OCG fix from Mau. Another simple yet effective effect, cute pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MauMau Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 better fix:You can remove from play this card from your Hand to add 1 Spell or Trap from your Graveyard to your Hand. again with simple but effective effects....9/10 your fix is wrong like to see more of your cards^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Trap OCG Fix You can only Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Pay 1000 Life Points and remove the attacking monster from play. Inflict damage to you opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of the attacking monster. You cannot enter your Battle Phase next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asuka Reishim Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Great card. its simple but that can be good.OCG error but others (i.e. MauMau) gave correct grammer).4/5 'cos always room for improvement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Cute Magician Alisa is like an easier to use and combined version of Magician of Faith and Mask of Darkness (one of them to add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand, the other is the same with Trap Cards). The boosted version of a Forbidden card? (Magician of Faith is Forbidden) Are you sure that's a good idea?The other card seems like a balanced deal in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Bungle Flying through the Sky pic is not very impressive, though its effect is fine 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Well, everything seems fine here. Guess I don't to correct you this time. D: Lol. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 I know they might have been corrected already, but I'm doing it differently :D Cute Magician Alisa:Remove from play this card from your hand to add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. Bungle Flying to the Sky:Pay 1000 Life Points to remove from play 1 attacking monster your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during your next turn. First card is kinda overpowered sinse as said before, Magician of Faith is a lowered version of this card and even like that it is banned. If you can add a little more of a cost it will be fine ;) Second card is alright but I don't like to skip my Battle Phase xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 @sleepy So u don't want to skip battle phase~~!! Hehehheheheh @Exa RaiunYeah, Magicain of Faith and Mask of Darkness are both forbidden by tournaments so that's why I made this ehehehehehehh.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Awww ^^ i love the pic for the first card and the second card is cool too ^^.The OCG's have already been fixed so ima skip that.Effects are great! the Pics are great too! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 @Lovely Lady Duelist Really?? Thanks~!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 lol ya ^^ no problem (^ᴥ^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Good stuff. The OCG's been fixed by everyone else; so good work 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 @Lovely Lady Duelist keep in touch ok?? @ max darkness I miss you~!!! thanks 4 the comment~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 @ max darkness I miss you~!!! thanks 4 the comment~!! I'm back!! And you're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 image of the trap isn't that great^^think first card could look better with a cool background and it is a bit OP trap seems balanced overall8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 @wanderley ill find a better image for the trap.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 @sleepy So u don't want to skip battle phase~~!! Hehehheheheh @Exa RaiunYeah' date=' Magicain of Faith and Mask of Darkness are both forbidden by tournaments so that's why I made this ehehehehehehh....[/quote'] Well, Magician of Faith is in fact banned, but Mask of Darkness, you can have 2 in a Deck in tournaments ^-^"or at least, as far as I know, that's how it was last time I checked (a long time ago but I remember checking xD ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Pictures: 10/10 Awesome pictures.OCG: 7/10 Good OCG, except for a few errors.Effect: 9/10 Cool effects. I love "Bungle Flying to the Sky." That could actually be a real card name. :) Overall: 9/10 Cool cards. You should make more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 @Skippy_canoeThanks for the comment and rate~~!! Look at my sig that's my cards that I made so far~!! The Fancy Hero Deck!! @sleepyMask of Darkness is banned too so.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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