Rehva Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 [align=center]Yay iam Back. Everything Was Done By me, Except The Pic. Original: [spoiler=Effect] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is attacked or is attacking, your Opponent Removes 1 card from their Graveyard from play. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Increase this card's ATK by 500 until the end of the turn. Come on this really does not Suck![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent must remove from play 1 card in their Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 pic is a little scratched, minor OCG errors 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 nice card ^_^ 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card attacks or is attacked' date=' your [b']o[/b]pponent must remove from play 1 card in their Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. Listen to this guy :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card attacks or is attacked' date=' your [b']o[/b]pponent must remove from play 1 card in their Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. Listen to this guy :P Actually, I think it should be more like:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent must remove 1 card in their Graveyard from play. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase. If you look very carefully, you can see that it is reworded differently. Also the card's pic is has too much holoing, took me bout 30 seconds to find the head. Also, the name is barely visible, you might want to fix that, cause I had to rely on the title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 "This this card attacks or is attacked" I like this part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 "This this card attacks or is attacked" I like this part. I do too, I love the word this so much I typed it twice and not say it was a mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[B.C.E.] Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Some errors and it doesn't seem all that impressive. Overall I don't really like it and you should work on it some more to make its effect a little more appealing. I didn't really give much thought to fixing to OCG so it's probably wrong but I'd say go back to the drawing board and remake it. Good try though. [1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card cannot be Special Summoned from your Graveyard. A monster declares an attack, the owner of the monster must remove 1 card in their Graveyard from play. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to increase this cards ATK by 500 until the End Phase.] Name: 5/10Pic: 4/10Effect: 5/10OCG: 4/10Playability: 7/10Overall: 50/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 A monster declares an attack' date=' the owner of the monster must remove 1 card in their Graveyard from play.[/quote'] I wasn't aware that the monsters declared the attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Bump. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 i like the idea of if you were a signer, your dragon would be _________ i think ima make one :Doh n not a bad card. at all ocg was fixed above, just follow holoing advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned ' date='[/color']except by Synchro Summon. If this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent must remove 1 card in their Graveyard from play. During your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. ^this + red parts added by me.Effect is alright, not super special awesome but it works so... ok. -Holo is awkward-Outline on the card description box (where you write the effect on the card) is of the wrong color-Name is almost invicible-Pic is too bright (holo is alright)-I appresiate the gold sticker but you don't have the 1st Edition or LIMITED EDITION part there, so its wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 -Holo is awkward-Outline on the card description box (where you write the effect on the card) is of the wrong color-Name is almost invicible-Pic is too bright (holo is alright)-I appresiate the gold sticker but you don't have the 1st Edition or LIMITED EDITION part there' date=' so its wrong.[/quote'] What they said ^^ 6.9 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altyrell Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 the edition of the name, the blue stars and the blue outline of the description card are distrating 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Hey It DOnt Matter Bout the Pic And Stuff, Just matters Bout The Effect And Creativity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Hey It DOnt Matter Bout the Pic And Stuff' date=' Just matters Bout The Effect And Creativity [/b'] Actually, the pic itself is important also. If you just care about the Effect, go to Written Cards <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Hey It DOnt Matter Bout the Pic And Stuff' date=' Just matters Bout The Effect And Creativity [/b'] Actually, the pic itself is important also. If you just care about the Effect, go to Written Cards <_< ^thisalso, I don't think it is really that important if you haven't corrected any of the things you have been advice above. Now about the pic, Level, Attribute and such look like from a Ghost rare, but the pic is secret rare for some reason ........why.....? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Fine I'll Just Post It's Original Self... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altyrell Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 ok, now based on the original: Name - 10/10Picture - 9/10Effect - 5/10 [before the changes suggested] 9/10 [after the changes suggested]Total 24/30 [before] 28/30 [after] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Thanks. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Thanks/bumP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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