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Tell me about any OCG Errors. I want to have a 60 card set i'm 1/5 of the way there.

Rate me like this

 

1/5=bad just get rid of this post!!![please don't be mean]

2/5=could be better

3/5=OK but need improvement[like OCG errors]

4/5=Good cards needs some improvement[better pics]

5/5 minimal to no errors

 

THANKS!!!

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Peppa Newbie

Peppa

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Hmm...on the right track I think, but a few things.

 

I skimmed the OCG, looked fairly clean except for the capitalization. Capitalization is OCG too!

 

Few hints for pictures, always have a background to the picture, never just a solid color. Also, there shouldn't be text on the pictures, like a Signature or Website.

 

4/10.

 

Keep at it.

 

Rate my cards?

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Bengal Newbie

Bengal

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OCG fix(es):

 

2nd card:

 

"This card gains 100 ATK for each Tuner in your Graveyard."

 

4th card:

 

"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

This card gains ATK and DEF equal to combined ATK and DEF of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card."

 

5th card:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This can can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Ninja Wolf" cards in your Graveyard..."

 

6th card:

 

special summon = Special Summon

"your side of the field" = "your field"

 

9th card:

 

"When this card is used for a Synchro Summon and the other Synchro Material Monster includes "Ninja" in its card name you gain 2000 Life Points."

 

12th card:

 

Put quotations around the Fusion Material Monsters.

 

 

The cards could use some work, the images aren't the best, the OCG needs revision and the effects are too simple.

 

3/5

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OnSlaUghT Newbie

OnSlaUghT

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OCG fix(es):

 

2nd card:

 

"This card gains 100 ATK for each Tuner in your Graveyard."

 

4th card:

 

"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

This card gains ATK and DEF equal to combined ATK and DEF of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card."

 

5th card:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This can can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Ninja Wolf" cards in your Graveyard..."

 

6th card:

 

special summon = Special Summon

"your side of the field" = "your field"

 

9th card:

 

"When this card is used for a Synchro Summon and the other Synchro Material Monster includes "Ninja" in its card name you gain 2000 Life Points."

 

12th card:

 

Put quotations around the Fusion Material Monsters.

 

 

The cards could use some work' date=' the images aren't the best, the OCG needs revision and the effects are too simple.

 

3/5

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Damn you beat me to it

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Flash Flyer - Sakura Newbie

Flash Flyer - Sakura

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Here's some OCG fixes for your cards:

 

Ninja Warrior:

 

For each card in your hand, this card loses 100 ATK.

 

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Ninja Bunny:

 

This card gains 500 ATK for each Tuner monster in your Graveyard.

 

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Robo Ninja:

 

1 "Ninja" Tuner + 1 non-Tuner monster

 

This card gains the combined ATK and DEF of the Synchro Material monsters you used to Synchro Summon this card

 

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Ninja Wolf:

 

This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 2 "Ninja" monsters in your Graveyard. The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the combined Levels of the removed monsters x 400. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can return to your Deck instead. You can only use this effect once per Duel.

 

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True Blood of a Ninja:

 

Equip only to a "Ninja" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. During each player's Main Phase, your opponent loses 100 Life Points for each card in their hand. When the equipped monster is destroyed, remove this card from play to Special Summon that monster.

 

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Panda Ninja:

 

This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your opponent's hand.

 

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Guardians of the Temple:

 

This card's effect can only be activated during your opponent's Battle Phase. Monsters you control gain 500 ATK during the Battle Phase only. When this card is destroyed, all monsters on the field.

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Ninja Werewolf:

 

If you use this monster for a Synchro Summon along with a "Ninja" Tuner, you gain 2000 Life Points.

 

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High Speed Ninja:

 

1 "Ninja" Tuner + 2 non-Tuner monsters

 

When this card destroys your opponent's monster by battle, Special Summon a monster from their Graveyard that has the same Level as the destroyed monster.

 

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Temple of Ninja Training:

 

"Ninja" monsters gain 500 ATK. If a "Ninja" monster you control destroys your opponent's monster by battle, discard the top card of their Deck.

 

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Ninja Woman:

 

"Ninja Bunny" + "Ninja Warrior"

 

A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above monsters. As long as this card remains face-up, your opponent cannot select any other monster you control as an attack target. During your End Phase, discard the top card of your Deck. If you do not, destroy this card.

 

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These are your effects, but with corrected OCG and all.

 

3.5/5, good theme but many OCG errors.

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