awesomeuser Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Very great, no errors. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 They're... interesting.... to say the least. Ritual support is not something you see very often. The Ritual Spell seems overpowered, imho, as there's no cost and you can get any LIGHT ritual monster for no more than you would with it's specific ritual card from your hand, and it's from your graveyard. The monsters have an interesting mechanic to them, which I actually think would be rather helpful. The other spell is good support for the new mechanic. overall - 13.22/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Your comment to LiaM makes me think that you are using OCG cards, japanese cards as guide, so you probably won't listen to this but I'm gonna say it anyways.. The "Whenever a monster is Ritual Summoned successfully" part could be simple "When a monster is Ritual Summoned," send 1 "Ritual Devil" card from your Deck to the Graveyard. Set looks good.. me like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Your comment to LiaM makes me think that you are using OCG cards' date=' japanese cards as guide, so you probably won't listen to this but I'm gonna say it anyways.. The "[b']Whenever a monster is Ritual Summoned successfully[/b]" part could be simple "When a monster is Ritual Summoned," send 1 "Ritual Devil" card from your Deck to the Graveyard. Set looks good.. me like I get really offended when you post OCG corrections without my expressed permission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I don't intend to start anything here, but other than OCG and balance, what else do you expect to see? I'm just trying to give feed back because if I don't, it is just spam from my part. And successfully doesn't really make a differense, if you look closely, the new monarch monsters don't have it, it hasn't really been used for the last 2 years of new cards (at least). Its old OCG, I'm just giving newer OCG, you don't have to get offended, you can just take it or ignore me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 If the world worked like that, there would be no personality.I want comments on creativity. Not how I spell a damned sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Love the cards Icy. How many are you planning to do?After you are done, are you planing on doing fusions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 fine, w/e I'll try and do that then....lets see. -It is based on extra support for the new "Stardust Overdrive" Ritual Support. Now they have their own Continuous specific Foolish Burial (it was about time they got support).-I see this strategy is not only good for Rituals alone, but also it can help the Sky Scourge cards and it kinda forms a new form of Twilight Deck.-Beconing the Light also makes wonders with this if your Rituals are LIGHT and these Devils are DARK.-LIGHT Ritual Monsters I can think of are the Queen of Oblibion, the Paladin of the White Dragon, and the Goddess of Salvation. I could have fun with the Dragon in an original Blue-Eyes Deck I'm thinking right now...Beckoning Sacrament is OK but not that impressive, there's an old DARK version and don't think it was that great..-I like your second monster, its a great searcher/recycler, I thought there would eventually have to be lowered and more specific versions of DMoC. Like this one which is just for Rituals.-The fallen Angel I would have trouble to use since the way I see the Deck build, most of the Ritual Tributes will end up removed from play... that might be a problem.. Even though you sound angry at me, I still like the cards, don't think there is anything overpowered about them, and they DO need it...Now it would be good if you also make a LIGHT Ritual Monster of your own, I don't think what the OCG/TCG has right now is varied enough... was that good enough? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I never did like Ritual monsters that much, but these are definately eye-candy. :) Good work. You should, however have image credits. P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Love the cards Icy. How many are you planning to do?After you are done' date=' are you planing on doing fusions?[/quote']Haha. I'm planning to do a full set for these. Trying to keep the s/t balance.And just for you, I'll make a fusion ;D fine' date=' w/e I'll try and do that then....lets see. -It is based on extra support for the new "Stardust Overdrive" Ritual Support. Now they have their own Continuous specific Foolish Burial (it was about time they got support).-I see this strategy is not only good for Rituals alone, but also it can help the Sky Scourge cards and it kinda forms a new form of Twilight Deck.-Beconing the Light also makes wonders with this if your Rituals are LIGHT and these Devils are DARK.-LIGHT Ritual Monsters I can think of are the Queen of Oblibion, the Paladin of the White Dragon, and the Goddess of Salvation. I could have fun with the Dragon in an original Blue-Eyes Deck I'm thinking right now...Beckoning Sacrament is OK but not that impressive, there's an old DARK version and don't think it was that great..-I like your second monster, its a great searcher/recycler, I thought there would eventually have to be lowered and more specific versions of DMoC. Like this one which is just for Rituals.-The fallen Angel I would have trouble to use since the way I see the Deck build, most of the Ritual Tributes will end up removed from play... that might be a problem.. Even though you sound angry at me, I still like the cards, don't think there is anything overpowered about them, and they DO need it...Now it would be good if you also make a LIGHT Ritual Monster of your own, I don't think what the OCG/TCG has right now is varied enough... was that good enough? :?[/quote']That was just lovely *hugs* I never did like Ritual monsters that much' date=' but these are definately eye-candy. :) Good work. You should, however have image credits. P.[/quote']You dont need image credits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Doesn't we anymore? Edit: Ok. I checked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Thanks Icy! =DI can't wait to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Monster = monster successfully is unneeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Monster = monster successfully is unneeded. Warned. For OCG only rule.Judge my creativity instead tyvm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Maybe you should write in the first post (in big letters), that you don't want OCG fix. That way we would prevent this from happening and you would get what you want :)Although it could be worse, there are people that only say "OCG, 7/10" without even looking xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Icy, amking Ritual Cards? Well I had begun to make 1 myself, but never got it complete. Only got 2. But I will take a full on review of your cards. #1: Ritual Devil Fallen Angel. Yes, I've heard of Ritual Devils that will help Rituals be Summoned through the Grave. Good name. Pic: It matches, but it seems rather sketchy. I just don't really think it fits. It looks like a WATER monster more than a DARK, IMO, but that just IMO. And I think it would've been better as a fiend. effect: It has the regular effect of the other Ritual Devils, so thats good. And its little twist is that when the Ritual Monster that this card was used for is gone in anyway, you can Special Summon 1 of the monsters used for the Summoning. It won't be this because its from the grave and this guy would have been removed. Overall for this one: 7.2/10. The card is quite balanced but has limited uses. Book of the Summoned: Well, it's about a monster being Summoned (a Ritual Summon). So it fits. Pic: A librarian reading a book. The pic kinda looks squashed, so it's meh. effect: Why would you send a Ritual Devil to the Grave after a Summon? I would send it before and then use them to Ritual Summon someone awesome. What if your trying to Summon multiples, good. Overall: 6.8/10 Ritual Devil Astraloth: cool name. Like it alot, he's like the boos Ritual Devil. Pic: About as epic, but if a 7 year old walked in and saw this, yeah. A bit scary, but still epic. effect: If he is Summoned in anyway, you can send him to the Grave for an additional Normal Summon. Though, I probably would only want to Summon him via Special Summon. Then when he is removed through this effect, you can add a Ritual Spell from your Deck or Grave, to your hand. Awesome for multiple Summons. Overall: 7.6/10 The last one is easy to review. It's just a simple Ritual Spell made specially for LIGHT's. Good name, good pic. But it's from the Grave, and I think I did that with one of my cards, except it was for any and there were some additional things, but anyways... 7.5/10 And no OCG errors? Or you said you copied them off of official cards for parts of the effects. So your good. They are good cards. Keep em comin. All together: 7.35/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I normally hate ritual cards, but these ones are great, i do not hate them! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 @Prime: You can dump any card you want for most rituals, and in any number. So you can sac any special summonable card along with it, and get that card back. Great for Skill Drain and other sets. As for the book, it's to mill your cards specifically. Ie: Add more to the grave for more summons. Or you can dump Astraloth and SS for more summons. Thanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 You're welcome. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Updated. 3 cards added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Wow, nice update Icy. I love how Titanus and Steps on Eternity coincide with each other. Petals of the Devil was OP'd until you added the last sentence. Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Icy is still making rituals playable. x_x Grr. Damnit. Now I must make some nearly unplayable game mechanic playable. >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Icy is still making rituals playable. x_x Grr. Damnit. Now I must make some nearly unplayable game mechanic playable. >.< How about fusions? They have pretty much gone in the crapper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Lol take that to the LCM thread.But thanks guys ^^ *psst!* I can probably make better cards for Fusions than Hunter can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I will beat you both at something soon...Unless you somehow read my mind through the internet and did it fast. TeeHee! :) Also, the new Devils OCG should be that it is treated as a Level 8 in the grave. The new Spell seems OP'ed, for you can get practically any Ritual Spell/Monster from pretty much anywhere with the cost being returning a Ritual Devil to Grave. Which is more like a bonus than anything. Then the Trap is alright, but a little situational. Alright, but I suggest you balance the new Spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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