Mysty Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Well, next, it's Albus dueling Trevor! Dattebayo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Well, next, it's Albus dueling Trevor! Dattebayo! Well I think Trevor has no limits too And who wins? Or are you going to flip a coin? Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Well, next, it's Albus dueling Trevor! Dattebayo! Well I think Trevor has no limits too And who wins? Or are you going to flip a coin? Lol. Dattebayo!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 yes? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caine Ghest Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 XD Alex with the camera, reminds me of another character of mine, Whisper... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Well, next, it's Albus dueling Trevor! Dattebayo! Well I think Trevor has no limits too And who wins? Or are you going to flip a coin? Lol. Dattebayo!!!! naruto just says it to say it so... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Wow' date=' he only knew her for 2 days and he already got in her bed. Anyway, I like to see how much this picture of Sarah "kissing" Trevor will change things. I'm also willing to see how far Trevor will go.[/quote'] Not actually in bed, just in the same room... O_o Oh, you have no idea what his limits are. Actually, there are none =DI figured that out.I don't really think his limits are the ones that matter. More like the girl's lack there of for pulling him into the room, though Albus has very few to none either. Whether he slept in her bed or not this time doesn't seem that it will make that much of a difference later. Well, next, it's Albus dueling Trevor! Dattebayo! Well I think Trevor has no limits too And who wins? Or are you going to flip a coin? Lol. Dattebayo!!!! naruto just says it to say it so... lol It means, BELIEVE IT! DATTEBAYO!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caine Ghest Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I was kinda hoping Alex would pull a knight in shining armor and save Sarah, setting up the Albus vs. Alex over Sarah's affection arc... although, that probably would be more of a unreturned love from Alex, as chapter 3 of Gunman's Tale will soon explain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 the 2nd chapter is ok...just you need to describe more and in 2 chapters there were no duels...you should put just 1 duel in this chapter...this chapter too short... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 the 2nd chapter is ok...just you need to describe more and in 2 chapters there were no duels...you should put just 1 duel in this chapter...this chapter too short... The chapter is not done fyi =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Hmmm... It seems as though my prediction was incorrect. No children's card games in Chapter 2... But otherwise, it's a good story... Albus is like the laides man of Duel Academy! Aha ha ha ha! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Hmmm... It seems as though my prediction was incorrect. No children's card games in Chapter 2... But otherwise' date=' it's a good story... Albus is like the laides man of Duel Academy! Aha ha ha ha! XD[/quote'] Aha ha ha ha, -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 then ok...I think this should be good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Lol, he doesn't finish the chapters until he says it.I think FC shows his prgoress to give you a taste and keep his fans from waiting!! Lol.Anyway Hmmm... It seems as though my prediction was incorrect. No children's card games in Chapter 2... But otherwise' date=' it's a good story... Albus is like the laides man of Duel Academy! Aha ha ha ha! XD[/quote'] Lol, he is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caine Ghest Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 First duel is about to begin, I was expecting Alex to come out and watch Albus duel, maybe he already is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Hold it! As a gentleman myself, I cannot allow a lady to be put up as a 'trophy'!!! Albus should decline those terms of the victor! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Hold it! As a gentleman myself' date=' I cannot allow a lady to be put up as a 'trophy'!!! Albus should decline those terms of the victor![/quote'] Like Trevor said, "Duel or die." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caine Ghest Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 So he is using a toon deck now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 So he is using a toon deck now? Well, the dream was in the future, but, yes, a toon deck XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Well okay... Hmmm, at least you didn't have a Super Orangutan! XD Or, KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! Also, "I'M GONNA KILL YOU (Insert name here) BECAUSE NOW I HAVE TO END MY TURN!!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Hm. I think I know where this is going? Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caine Ghest Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 FC you've got me on pins and needles to see what is going to happen next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 hmm I wonder whats going to happen next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryno Dorcus Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 hmm I wonder whats going to happen next? I'm with you, I can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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