chizuruotohime Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I decided to make my Ace card, Kosmos in Japanese version since Cyber_ice made Athena japanese card for me....This japanese card version of Kosmos I have made from Photoshop Hope you like it~~!! THANKS TO FATALEXE FOR THE TEXT ~~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO KOSMOS card] "Fancy Hero Micro Kosmos" + 1 or more Non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned succesfully, it cannot be destroyed by card effects in this turn. [/align] This one was made thanks to FatalEXE's texts~~!! So I made it out of photoshop~~!! Here it is The Assault Mode Kosmos [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO KOSMOS/ASSAULT MODE card] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". It cannot be destroyed by Spell , Trap , and Effect Monster's effect.When this card on the field is destroyed in battle, Special Summon 1 "Fancy Hero Kosmos" from your Graveyard. Note: The Japanese version of Assault Mode is Buster Mode. [/align] This is my own version of Athena~~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO ATHENA (MY Version) card] When there are other "Fancy Hero" monsters on your side of the field except "Fancy Hero Athena", this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. [/align] Erminguard added~~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO ERMINGUARD card]When this card is in Defence Position, all other "Fancy Hero" monster(s) on your side of the field cannot be selected as attack targets except "Fancy Hero Erminguard" and this card cannot be destroyed in battle. [/align] [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO LUCIE card]When this card attacks, increase this card's ATK by 800 until the end of Damage Step. [/align] STATICAAQUAMARIE and FREYA ADDED~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO STATICA card]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all opponent's monster cards cannot be played face-down. If there are face-down monster(s) when this card is summoned, flip them face-up and their effects are negated. [/align] [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO AQUAMARIE card]When this card was added from your deck to your hand by an effect of a Monster, Spell, or Trap Card, Special Summon this card to your side of the field. When this card was successfully Special Summoned, draw 2 cards from your deck. [/align] [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO FREYA card]This card is unaffected by Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict the same Battle Damage you took from this battle to your opponent's Life Points. [/align] MARIAN, HANNA, and BLAIR ADDED~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO MARIAN card]As long as this card remains in your graveyard, a "Fancy Hero" monster can be Normal Summoned without a tribute. You can only use this effect one time. [/align] [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO HANNA card]If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. [/align] [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO BLAIR card]During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. [/align] MICRO KOSMOS ADDED~!! [align=center][spoiler= F- HERO MICRO KOSMOS card]If this card is used as Synchro Material Monster, it can only be for the Synchro Summon of a "Kosmos" monster. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 below "Fancy Hero" monster from your deck except "Fancy Hero Micro Kosmos". [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Like the short effects, looks a little OP but I think it is not (I think :?).LIke the Japanese version too :D. Rate - 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Like the short effects' date=' looks a little OP but I think it is not (I think :?).LIke the Japanese version too :D. Rate - 8.4/10[/quote'] I'm sorry to say....THIS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 thanks anyways~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Nice work (as always). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Thank god for the English effect at the bottom. LOL But i loves Kosmos, Athena is ofcouse similar 2 E-Hero Avian, which i always thought was cool. 9/10 maybe 9.5 cause they are in Japanese. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I like them both ^^ they dont seem OP at all and they look as cool as your english ones ^^ great job!! 9.99/10 for both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Excellent pictures, although the 1st card could use another effect 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Heh, thanks for giving me credit, Chizu. ^^ I think Athena came out really nicely, especially when compared to the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 9.6/10! Like the pic and the imune effect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Effects look a little simple but in their Deck they look quite effective :)and I love the pics :D when are we getting them in america? lol xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Sleepy, Fancy Hero Athena's effect is, like, awesome. It's a mix of Fortune Lady Windy and Cyber Tutu. >_O Any more effects and it would be too many... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 oops, I don't know how did I read that xD I only noticed the "attack directly" part sorry ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 I like them.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thanks for all the comments~~!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatalExe Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 u made a mistake in the japanese card lore for kosmos.この.....成功した時 it means when u successfully summoned it, but u didnt state that the effect only works for the turn.so you should change it toこの.....成功したのターンは、このカードはカードの効果で破壊されない。 you also used a fake type for athena, and the lore(ocg) is terrible.Warrior type in japanese is 戦士族i'll try to help u create a new text このカードの召喚、特殊召喚に成功した時、自分フィールド上に存在する「F HERO」と名のついたモンスターの数まで、相手フィールド上の魔法、罠カードを破壊する事ができる。このカードは相手プレイヤーに直接攻撃をする事ができる。 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 yeah, I was finding that kind of text in yugioh.wikia...But thanks~!! I'll modify it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatalExe Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 i helped u type the text in my post above, just edited it. check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I didn't made that Athena card effect, I only made Kosmos, Cyber_ice made the Athena effect. I'll notify Cyber_ice for that...Thanks for your help~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thanks to fatalEXE, I have made changes to Kosmos' japanese texts~~!! Thank u FatalEXE~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thanks, FatalExe. I just used a simple program translator for Athena's lore, but I was aware that her effect should have 「F HERO」in it. Thanks so much for providing those symbols!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 BUSTER MODE ACTIVATE~~!!athena added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 7/10nothing to say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 thanks~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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