Magical Serpent's Skin

[Sleepy]

Code:Stucture Deck - Sleepy/ Card #3 (I'm doing my own YCM Deck for a fan-fic and because its the primary reason I joined the site to begin with ^-^)

There will only be 1 card per thread so I can get comments on everything <_<

 

Here:

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This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. You can Normal Summon this card without Tributes by Special Summoning 2 or more monsters from your Graveyard' date=' with a combined Level equal to this card's Level. The monsters Summoned in this way must have different Types, cannot attack and are removed from play during the End Phase.[/quote'][/align]

 

You can critic the pic, OCG, balance, everything.

 

EDIT:

Almost forgot, pic credit: drawn by me and colored by me by hand, as always with me ^-^

 

[spoiler=Drawings:]

[spoiler=Sketch:]

 

[spoiler=Render:]

 

[spoiler=Complete:]

 

 

 

[Archwing]

The effect is a little confuseing... 8/10

[Sleepy]

It basically says:

-you cannot Special Summon it.

-you don't need to Tribute for it as long as you revive its Level worth of monsters

To balance it:

-this card can't attack during the turn it is Summoned

-the monsters you revided with its effect can't attack at all

-You must revive 2 or more monsters, you can't do this with another Level 7

-the monsters revived must have different Types, you can't use (let's say) 2 Spellcasters

-the revived monsters are removed during the end phase (DON'T STAY ON THE FIELD)

 

that's about it^ ^-^ thanks for the comment.

[Archwing]

okay I get it now, 9/10 and make more please. Its nice to see some actual Reptile type monsters.

[Sleepy]

Thanks ^-^

I might do more reptiles in the future, but my Deck actually has 1 of each Type ;)

 

Added spoiler with the big drawing :)

[zombiepromking]

Nice Drawing. Nothing wholly wrong with it. Really nothing wrong with it at all. Balance it out a bit more and this card would be pretty good. Nice job on the originality.

 

9.5/10 - Nothing wrong with it just think that it needs a bit more balance and maybe it removes the monsters from play instead of sending them back to your hand. (just think about this card in a rescue kitty deck ugh...)

[Sleepy]

yes that sounds pretty good xD

I can imagine what you are saying, I originally made it for a quick swarming and mass Synchro Summons lol.

 

I'll change it ASAP

thank you ;)

 

EDIT: changed

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

interesting effect.

can the revived cards still be tributed?

its wording is slightly confusing but after your explaination it makes sense.

picture is nice too.

9/10

[Altαir]

Intresting effect. I can almost see how it mixes with the card name, so that's awesome. I like the originality of the effect, it could be useful in many ways. Oh, and to answer Sephiroth's question, no they can't be tributed. Only for a Special Summon or something that doesn't have to do with summoning. Summoning this card counts as a Normal Summon. Unless you have the ability to Normal Summon twice in a turn...

 

Anyway, you get a 9.99/10

[Sleepy]

interesting effect.

can the revived cards still be tributed?

its wording is slightly confusing but after your explaination it makes sense.

picture is nice too.

9/10

 

Yes it can' date=' but since its your Normal Summon of this turn, I don't see that happening too often ;)

 

Intresting effect. I can almost see how it mixes with the card name, so that's awesome. I like the originality of the effect, it could be useful in many ways.

 

You get a 9.99/10

 

Thanks to both for the comments ^-^

(is the wording that confusing? I might need help then ^-^" )

[Altαir]

Dang it, I edited too late...

[Sleepy]

don't worry ^-^

2 comments are more backup to the answer :D

 

Anyways, keep the comments comming :)

[ragnarok1945]

only the 2200 atk is a bit too low for lv7, I'd raise it a little higher, the rest is great

 

9.5/10

[Sleepy]

It used to be 2600 ATK / 2600 DEF but I thought of making it weaker. That type of effect really calls for the card to sound weak, its a free 3 monsters after all ;)

 

-in the fan-fic this is made for, this card will be Summoned reviving a Level 1 Tuner, a Level 2 Tuner, and a Level 4 monster.

-Then the Level 2 Tuner will be used with the Level 4 monster for a Level 6 Synchro, then the Level 4 monster has the effect of comming back, and the Tuner lets me draw.

-Then, the Level 1 Tuner will be used with this card for a Level 8 Synchro.

 

That's how with just 1 card, I summoned 2 Synchros, a Level 4 monster, and drew a card (a +3). with no drawbacks like substracting ATK, negating effects or anything.

It almost sounds unfair xD

 

I figured this card would be concidered Overpowered ^-^"

do you think its ok to increase its ATK? by about how much would it be OK? :)

[Neo-MasterX]

9/10

[Sleepy]

9/10

 

ammm...ummm... do you have anything else to say? >_>

[ragnarok1945]

It used to be 2600 ATK / 2600 DEF but I thought of making it weaker. That type of effect really calls for the card to sound weak' date=' its a free 3 monsters after all ;)

 

-in the fan-fic this is made for, this card will be Summoned reviving a Level 1 Tuner, a Level 2 Tuner, and a Level 4 monster.

-Then the Level 2 Tuner will be used with the Level 4 monster for a Level 6 Synchro, then the Level 4 monster has the effect of comming back, and the Tuner lets me draw.

-Then, the Level 1 Tuner will be used with this card for a Level 8 Synchro.

 

That's how with just 1 card, I summoned 2 Synchros, a Level 4 monster, and drew a card (a +3). with no drawbacks like substracting ATK, negating effects or anything.

It almost sounds unfair xD

 

[b']I figured this card would be concidered Overpowered ^-^"[/b]

do you think its ok to increase its ATK? by about how much would it be OK? :)

 

I'd just boost it to 2400 atk/def or something

[Sleepy]

ATK boosted to 2400 then^

 

thanks for helping me on this ^-^

[ragnarok1945]

that's more like it. Now it's balanced enough for me to raise the rate to 9.9/10