Dragon of the Phoenix Flame

[Sleepy]

Comment as much as you wish.

My priorities are

-know how to improve the pic

-If this card is overpowered.

-I want ideas for a better name, or better said, a more suitable name.

 

Anyways, opinions first :)

 

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You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by Tributing 3 monsters. If you do' date=' destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls.

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I know, not one of my best drawings but I want to improve ^-^"

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[Scyire]

It's a little overpowered. I suggest making the three tributed monsters be removed from play. The pic, is great. You're a great artist. My only suggestion is maybe outline it with a black marker, so it can be seen better.

4/5

[-Berserker-]

I like it a lot sleepy. Maybe changing the background that fits the pic, attribute, name, effect?

[Sleepy]

It's a little overpowered. I suggest making the three tributed monsters be removed from play. The pic' date=' is great. You're a great artist. My only suggestion is maybe outline it with a black marker, so it can be seen better.

4/5

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I don't want to remove them from play (won't help my Deck in the fan-fic)

There must be some other drawbacks we could have ^-^"

Something like.. how much ATK/DEF should I make it instead of 3000? and/or a slight Life Point cost for doing it xD

 

Also, Removed the burning part ;)

 

I like it a lot sleepy. Maybe changing the background that fits the pic' date=' attribute, name, effect?

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I slightly darkened the Background, but I think it needs a better name :)

hmmmm......

 

EDIT:

-Lowered ATK by 200 and DEF by 1000

-Added 1000 Life Point Cost

-Removed the "inflict damage" part of the effect

[herbie]

i dont really think that you need both the lp cost and the tributes

just the tributes would be enough in my opinion

[Kotaro]

The effect is balanced, maybe a bit UP but thats me. OCG looks good, the effect is a bit bland though.

 

Pic looks good but doesnt really look like it would be a FIRE attribute.

 

overall, 8/10

[breann101]

how about Phoenix fire dragon?? idk just a suggestion

[vadim26]

Card looks great I don't think the effect is too OP'd but then again all of my cards are OP'd apparently. :D But otherwise the background could be fire or something alike but it's a great looking picture and a good card! 9/10

[ragnarok1945]

it should have another effect, the summoning effect for destroying all your opponent's cards is great, but it's not a lasting one

 

9/10

[Sleepy]

@ragnarok1945:

Believe me ;) the Tribute for destroying doesn't sound that helpful but in tests has helped me win, its so fun xD

I just really want this effect for this card. Just adjusting it to balance ;)

Thanks for commenting :D

 

how about Phoenix fire dragon?? idk just a suggestion

 

If you think it fits the pic AND the effect, then its ok ;)

thanks for suggestion.

 

@everyone:

Knowing the differences with Gilford the Lightning:

- Gilford goes for all, this card only hits face-ups.

-Gilford is your Normal Summon, this card is a Special Summon.

-Gilford can do it from the hand, this card can only activate from the Graveyard.

[WTF]

okay

 

8/10

[Sleepy]

okay

8/10

 

Should I ask you for more advice or just ignore the 1-word-comment >.>

Seriously I need advice, not rates, even a name suggestion is enough.

 

EDIT:

@Kotaro:

Thanks :D I wanted to remove the cost of possible, I now have 2 or 3 comments saying its not overpowered like that ^-^

What Attribute would actually fit it? I'm thinking on DARK but want opinions.

Cost removed :)

 

Still looking for name suggestions

[Kotaro]

For attribute, i would use it as WIND but it is your card and your choice i guess. As for the name, i dont usually make up good names for my cards either.

[juergen2000]

yeah the pic looks more like a wind attribute monster, but then it needs another name

[Sleepy]

I don't want to put names like the ones I've thought, too easy to predict.

Stuff that almost sounds like Genetic Super Special Awesome Legendary God Dragon of Doom :lol:

 

I like wind too, Attributes don't really play a big role in my Deck so, I'll pretty much do as you please ;)

 

(Making changes, update comes in a moment)

 

EDIT:

temporary name changed (for now until a better name comes)

 

The Attribute was left as DARK, I would have done it a WIND but it actually has some fire in the tail and wings (upper little wings).

[breann101]

i think it will go with both

[ragnarok1945]

@ragnarok1945:

Believe me ;) the Tribute for destroying doesn't sound that helpful but in tests has helped me win' date=' its so fun xD

I just really want this effect for this card. Just adjusting it to balance ;)

Thanks for commenting :D

 

how about Phoenix fire dragon?? idk just a suggestion

 

If you think it fits the pic AND the effect, then its ok ;)

thanks for suggestion.

 

@everyone:

Knowing the differences with Gilford the Lightning:

- Gilford goes for all, this card only hits face-ups.

-Gilford is your Normal Summon, this card is a Special Summon.

-Gilford can do it from the hand, this card can only activate from the Graveyard.

 

Gilford's effect is still not easy to pull off anyway though

[Lost Soul]

better name: Spiral Dragon - Envoy of Death

With that name you can make more Spiral Dragon cards and make it an archtype

[ourchimaru]

that is awesome:D

[ragnarok1945]

that is awesome:D

 

don't put your attachments in here please

[jaster_rogue]

good OCG, the pic is intersting

I liked it

9/10

[Sleepy]

better name: Spiral Dragon - Envoy of Death

With that name you can make more Spiral Dragon cards and make it an archtype

 

I like the Spiral in the name, I think I'll go with that ^-^

although I won't really make archtypes because all cards in the Deck I'm planning are supposed to be unattached to each other as much as possible. Like if they were meant for a certain Deck but ended up working nicely in my fan-fic-Deck. :)