Dramatic Crossroad Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I always thought 'Red Dragon Archfiend' needed more themed cards of it's own (i mean wth - Stardust has Debris Dragon, Xiaolong, and Red has nothing, except Crimson Fire that's as good as useless). So, here's a Debris Dragon Counterpart... The Picture is drawn by me, so don't bother asking for credits...The OCG WAS EDITED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I would love to get this card, but I can't because I don't have Royal Archfiend A, B, or C. Once I have those I'll gladly use this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Pretty balanced, the pic is sweet. ^_^ The last sentence's ocg is wrong, not sure of the fix. Nice though 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Woding of the last sentence seems off. =/ Besides that, sweet card. Great support and gotta love the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I would love to get this card' date=' but I can't because I don't have Royal Archfiend A, B, or C. Once I have those I'll gladly use this one.[/quote']The 'D.' part means Dragon (in most cases). However it thought it would be cool if it's type and name does not contain the same word. The last sentence should be : ''Destroy any Defence Position monster attacked by this card at the end of the Damage Step'' or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I would love to get this card' date=' but I can't because I don't have Royal Archfiend A, B, or C. Once I have those I'll gladly use this one.[/quote']The 'D.' part means Dragon (in most cases). However it thought it would be cool if it's type and name does not contain the same word. The last sentence should be : ''Destroy any Defence Position monster attacked by this card at the end of the Damage Step'' or something like that.You know what you should do, make a Royal Archfiend A, B, and C. then I could use all of them and not have to count which numbers I'm missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Nice picture, i wonder, how long did it take to draw it. I wont comment on OCG because there isnt any other than the last sentence which you know about. In a way, the last part of the effect is like d.d warrior lady but a bit different. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 quite impressive self drawn pic, only the last sentence in the effect is off in OCG, the effect itself is great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Fixed and all better now (or at least i hope it is). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Self-drawn cards have more originality. I like it. Nice effect. 8.5/10 (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Fixed and all better now (or at least i hope it is). that's good, the OCG does looks right, so I'll raise the rate to 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Since I love to be the only one in a topic to actually help with the OCG: If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy that monster after damage calculation. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, it can only be for the Synchro Summon of an "Archfiend" or DARK monster. I think that's correct. I'm pretty sure there's some card that has the same effect as the first sentence, but I can't quite remember it. While the pic could certainly be improved upon, I could tell that you tried pretty hard to get it done, and I'm impressed. This is certainly a good Tuner counterpart for Red Dragon Archfiend, and it's much better than Debris Dragon. Don't expect a numbered score from me, since I don't do that. On that note, I don't think improving OCG is worth just 0.3 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 1st effect: (if i modify Drillroid's lore) + 2nd effect (Modified Torapart/Debris Dragon) = If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect after damage calculation. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of an "Archfiend" or DARK Synchro Monster.I wanted it to be balanced, since all Lv4 or higher tuners (except Rose) have some restrictions - "Debris" can summon only Dragons, "Road Sync' works for only his Warrior Counterpart, 'Quick Synch' can only splash "Synchron Warriors', Trap Eater is a Nomi 0.0... Yet this card can summon Red D. Archfiend, Thought Ruler Archfiend or any Ally of Justice rather quickly, since it's searchable by both Tomato and Masked Dragon, "Allure"-able. Having a slightly less powered effect than it's 'Big Brother' (it's highly unlikely people having more than 1 defence position monster out nowadays) it could help with pests like Marsh and Reaper without the inconvenience of being sent to a bottomless trap hole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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