Lunnas Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 this is my very first time making any of these. please comment on them and tell me what needs to be improved on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Well...interesting. to say the least ^.^ hmm Roy's effect just needs to be worded a little better, but Edward is quite the god you created...maybe give hime more of a cost? after all..."To obtain, something of equal value must be lost" xDD Scar...fascinating, but id have thought he'd be a stronger monster...and as he only gains when battling ED and Roy (in a sense) hes kind of useless... The Philosopher's stone shouldnt say when its equipped if its a continuous, and likewise it cant affect all monsters if its an equip card, pick one or the other...the truth of the matter is that its quite powerful, living up to its legend...but..."This is the principle of equivalent exchange..." good luck! i hope to see some outstanding work from you in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
resaclan62 Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 They are good cards. Though you forgot capitalization here and there and there are some minor OCG errors. And keep in mind that if you want a good rating, remember that you pick pictures wit background. not just blank white and black. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 work on em,make mustang and eds effect more detailed ,me love full metal alchamest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunnas Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 [uPDATE] i went back and fixed both Ed's and Roy's effects and i made some more but they are still WIP. Greed's effect i know is worded wrong but i'm still trying to word it right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 hmmm give alex an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunnas Posted September 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 i'm working on that. can't really think of a really good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 ask some body for a suggestion dont ask me i suck wit effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 hmm..two of the cards wont show up maybe it's just an error with my computer.Isn't the philoposter's stone from harry potter?Well for these cards i give 6/10 P.S.-Try to use real effects instead of made-up ones! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunnas Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 i'm new to all this and i am woking on the other homunculi and alchemist. effects i'm still working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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