Slayerman98 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Hi,its my 3rd post.Hope you like!If you veiw them please post on how you like or dislike them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 First of all, it's not "Griffins" or "Griffiths". It's "Griffin". Please fix those name and effect mistakes. Now: Images need backgrounds (I can only see half of Brian's image, and Meg's picture seems a bit off)Why is Brian WIND, Chris WATER and Meg DIVINE? IMO, they should all be earth (Although Stewie is fine as DARK).Effects are pretty unoriginal. This is what happens all the time too, do not make effects that rely closely on other characters just because they are in the same series.Peter Griffin's fixed effect:"Once per turn, By skipping your Battle Phase, you can put 1 Food Counter (max.3.)on this card. By removing 3 Food Counters from this card, return all monsters your opponent controls to his/her hand."Lois Griffin's fixed effect:"Once per turn, by paying 600 Life points, you can Special Summon 1 "Griffin" monster from your hand."Give them real types. I would change them to be:Human= WarriorAnimal= BeastAnd why is Stewie an "Alien"? Overall, 3/10. Please read what I have posted and fix these cards to make them 6 times better than what they are now. Keep it up! If you want any more help, PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayerman98 Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Yeah Brains pic is crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Brian's pic just had an uploading error, is all. What needed to eb said has been said. 2.0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 first brians picture suckssecond they all suckthird IT IS GRIFFIN NOT "GRIFFINS" OR "GRIFITH"And Fourth Stewie is a WARRIOR TYPE NOT HUMAN OR HUMANALIEN0.0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Don't use fake types and why's Meg DIVINE. I understand why the last four cannot be summoned when they're each on the field, but you have to work on your OCG a lot. Brian's pic is half cut so I can't see the whole thing. But anyway, 5/10 b/c you made an ok effort and plus I'm being nice 2 day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Don't use fake types and why's Meg DIVINE. I understand why the last four cannot be summoned when they're each on the field' date=' but you have to work on your OCG a lot. Brian's pic is half cut so I can't see the whole thing. But anyway, 5/10 b/c you made an ok effort and plus I'm being nice 2 day[/quote'] Since I don't mind fake types, I'll boost it to 5.000000001/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 4/10 and check my family guy set out :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakenny Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 1:the ocg is very bad just find what the names are and your ocg is sorta okay 2:the pics are not good Brian is cut in half just put some pics of them from the episodes 3:and then the attributes and types peter meg chris stewie and lois should be warrior and Brian as beast/beast warrior and all attributes should be earth over all 4.4/10 first try so it's a okay start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metroid Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Pretty good but not the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Ocgs terrible and please do not use fake types, also please use a backround for the pic. Also why is one of them DIVINE with only 4 stars.2/10Best I can give till the cards get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohkingofhell Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Here is my version of peter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 No posting on other people's threads, create your own thread... However, THAT is Waaay better than the ones I saw... Make your own thread with this and I'll comment on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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