Guest H3SE Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Hello everyone who may be staring at their computer monitor for 3+ hours. This is as said above, a response to high ATK and low DEF cards. Please rate and give positive criticism.EDIT: Card pic changed and effect improved.EDIT (2): Added a monster card.During each player's End Phase all face-up monsters lose 400 ATK and 400 DEF. If there are any monsters during the End Phase with 0 ATK or 0 DEF, those monsters are destroyed and the controlling player takes 400 damage. For each monster destroyed by this effect, place 1 decay counter on this card. For each counter on this card when it is destroyed, the controlling player takes 800 damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 its not bad but nothing overly special. effect is a little plain and boring, its nothing really new and exciting.picture really doesnt suit the name....7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jord200 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 not bad. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Eh. I can see the purpose behind it, and I think it would do it's job well. A little slow, and nothing over-the-top, but good.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 not quite sure how the name fits the pic, and the effect while balanced is plain 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 The card's effect does need a little work to spice it up. However it's balanced and both the pic and name fits each other. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 It's kinda like Venom Swamp, except for DEF points instead. Balanced effect and pic fits the card name. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 this would really only take out monsters with 200 def. not really useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 If it's Death and Decay, then the monsters should go to the Graveyard. Seems like a Venom Swamp for DEF. Needs support monsters like a Death N' Decay Platypus (joking) or a Death N' Decay Soldier. Add Decay Counters to affected monsters to enhance the card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Probably UP. -200 DEF wouldn't hurt most monsters. Make it at least -500 DEF. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 agreedchange the amount to about 500 and make it so the cards are destroyed not removedwould speed it up a lot and balance it out nicelybut as is 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Card has been changed. Balanced out a little bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Now it looks digusting, but art fits with the card a little better. Now, I have to go throw up lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 The pic is just weird. I can spot some OCG errors, and this card could use a more creative name. Pretty balanced effect though. 7/10. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 The pic is just weird. I can spot some OCG errors' date=' and this card could use a more creative name. Pretty balanced effect though. 7/10. :)[/quote']Â Can you point out the OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 The pic is just hideous....(LOVING IT) Good and balanced card. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Still makes my skin crawl... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Re-edited with a monster that will benefit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Still makes my skin crawl... Good. What is the point of using the word "death" if there isn't any nasty factor to it. FYI that is an exploded heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Decaying Soldier is pretty strong as is, maybe you should lower its ATK to 1500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
→мαthєus. Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Strange Card! I never seen something like it before OCG Fix: During either player's Standby* Phase, Decrease the ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters by 400. During either players' End Phase, destroy all face-up monsters with 0 of ATK and DEF¹ and Inflict 200 Damage to the destroyed card's controller's Life Points . For each monster destroyed by this effect, place 1 Decay Counter on this card. For each Decay Counter on this card when it is destroyed, Inflict 200 Damage to this card's controller's Life Points. you got an 84/100 because you're newb but you did a great job fo a newb  Keep on this way dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 But without it's current ATK it would be pretty able to succumb to the fact that it is UP'ed until powered up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 You're right, a lot of cards could destroy this card right now. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Good, some OCG errors 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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