~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Check these cards out. I decided to make these because I am interested I love learning about the immune system in class and love to find preventives to such uncurable dieases and Virus such as Hodgkins T-Cell Lymphoma and HIV. once I am done, I should have about every virus and disease out there. Enjoy.[spoiler=[b]Set A[/b]] REPS are acceptable [spoiler=[b]Card Lores[/b]]Common Cold Virus When this card is Summoned, equip this card to 1 of your opponent's monsters. Each turn, decrease the equipped monsters ATK by 500. When the equipped monsters ATK becomes 0, destroy it. If the monster this card is equipped to is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 2 "Common Cold Virus Tokens" (Aqua-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 500/DEF 1000) in face-up Defense Position. HIV This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is Summoned, treat this card as an Equip Spell Card to 1 of your opponent's monsters and decrease its ATK and DEF by 750. If the monster equipped is destroyed by battle or the ATK and DEF becomes 0, unequip this card and equip it to another of your opponent's monsters, and Special Summon 3 "HIV Tokens" (Aqua-Type/LIGHT/Level 5/ATK 350/DEF 2600) and treat them as Equip Spell Cards to 3 of your opponent's monsters, and decrease their ATK and DEF by 300 each turn. If the ATK and DEF of 1 of your opponent's monster becomes 0, destroy the monster and the Equip Card. H1N1 VirusAs long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent loses 500 Life Points each turn. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards and Effect Monsters. if this card is destroyed by battle, destroy your opponent's monster that destroyed monster (Battle Calculation is applied normally). CytomegalovirusThis card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Effect Monsters and Trap Cards. Each turn this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the ATK of all monsters you opponent controls by 500. If this card is destroyed by battle, your opponent loses 1000 Life Points. Polio Virus As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when your opponent activates an Equip Spell Card, use this card as the Equip Spell Card instead. If the equipped monster is destroyed, this card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster and returns to your side of the field. ( If the ATK of this card becomes 2500 or higher, destroy this card. ) Smallpox Virus This card cannot be destroyed by the Effects of your opponent's monsters. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon one Cowpox "Virus" or one Polio "Virus". Cowpox Virus This card gains 500 ATK Points for each Smallpox "Virus" on the field. once this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon one Smallpox "Virus". If there are any corrections I need to make I will correct them right away if I get time Coming Soon: Cowpox ViusMeasles VirusHodgkins T-Cell LymphomaChornic Lymphocytic Luekeimia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 I was expecting more from a 3000+ posts member. The pic is really bad. Your grammar is... worse than the pic, sorry. The ideia is quite interesting, though. ^^5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Tell me what I need to fix and what type of pic to use and then it will be better for me and haven't been on this site for a while due to vacations and schoolI was expecting more from a 3000+ posts member. The pic is really bad. Your grammar is... worse than the pic' date=' sorry. The [b']idea[/b] is quite interesting, though. ^^5/10 You have also grammar problems yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 I don't know if I can fix all the effect, but some parts:"When this card is Summoned succesfully, you can equip this card to any monster your opponent controls. During each turn, decrease the equipped monster's ATK by 500. When the equipped monster's ATK becomes 0, destroy this card. If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, destroy this card."The rest is confuse. Counters have no ATK or DEF. I think you mean Tokens.The pic is blurry, too. You could look for a bigger one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Alright I will fix the correction in a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Correct OCG:When this card is Summoned, equip this card to 1 of your opponent's monsters. Each turn, decrease the equipped monsters ATK by 500. When the equipped monsters ATK becomes 0, destroy it. If the monster this card is equipped to is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 2 "Common Cold Virus Tokens" (Aqua-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 500/DEF 1000) in face-up Defense Position. Change the pic, sure you can find a good 1 at DA 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thanks:DI will do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 No problems, glad I can help :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Yes you didAlso I changed the pic not to denviartBecause my Norton 360 internet security thinks it is a stupid threat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 now when it's changed I'll raise to 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Interesting...8/10Like it.But was exepting Virus Trap Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightSoul Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 i dont care what the others think i like it, it's differnt 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Forgot 1 thing, should read:"Common Cold Virus Token"s´ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 LoL, now it's much better, the pic is great ^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 яαρнαєl ' x: Thank you for your rate and commentTomtekorv: It doesn't work like that because that means I am putting S out of the quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 if it's Aqua, why isn't it a WATER attribute? the effect is fine the way it is, although you should put some token restrictions on it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Virus is LIGHT that is whyAlso thanks for your rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 8/10Like the pic. Anyway I could see the old one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 -I don't like "50"s in the ATKs and DEF but whatever xD-The effect looks a little slow and it also technically protects your opponent's monsters.-The effect of the Tokens, I'm not sure if you did this on purpose, but when this card is destroyed instead of the monster, it technically is treated as destroyed by its own effect, and you won't get the Tokens. I suggest you either add "If this card is destroyed by its own effect, it is treated as destroyed by battle." or change it in any other way if that wasn't on purpose. For now, I appreciate the effort but card is too slow... I see that even though there's no cure for the common cold, its not that threatening anyways lol 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Common Cold does have a vaccine so you can be techinally cured for the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Yeah, but its only to control it rather than to cure it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I also could've made a virus card that is HIV but it can't be cured like that other virus I made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 BUMPDoes anyone else want to rate and comment on the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Fix for HIV:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is Summoned, treat this card as an Equip Spell Card to 1 of your opponent's monsters and decrease its ATK and DEF by 750. If the monster equipped is destroyed by battle or the ATK and DEF becomes 0, unequip this card and equip it to another of your opponent's monsters, and Special Summon 3 "HIV Tokens" (Aqua-Type/LIGHT/Level 5/ATK 350/DEF 2600) and treat them as Equip Spell Cards to 3 of your opponent's monsters, and decrease their ATK and DEF by 300 each turn. If the ATK and DEF of 1 of your opponent's monster becomes 0, destroy the monster and the Equip Card. Don't really know if it's right OCG but think so.Pic for HIV is good and effect as wellfor both cards I'll give 8.98/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Thanks for the fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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