-DOOM Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 THE DISLOYAL DOOMTHE DISLOYAL DOOMtddmIn cooperation of PlasmaTheHero and HP DOOM In cooperation of PlasmaTheHero [align=center][spoiler= [b]Click here to view Booster] It's my first Booster, pls say what can be improved![/align][spoiler=[b] Eplanation of the "SWITCH" Subtype[/b]]A Switch monster can be Special Summoned to the owners opponents side of the field too. When the control of a Switch monster changes, the owners opponent can only attack with the monster, not activate the effects of the monster. The effects can still only be activated by the owner of the Switch monster.[spoiler=[b] Eplanation of the "SWITCH" Subtype[/b]] Newest CardNewest Card [align=center]Reversed Steal LoreYou can only activate this card when the control of a "Disloyal" monster you control switches. Pay 800 Life Points and gain control of 1 "Disloyal" monster your opponent controls. You can Special Summon 1 "Disloyal" monster from your Graveyard to your opponent's side of the field to draw 1 card.[/align] [align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]049 - Deserter's Punishment] LoreYou can only activate this card if your opponent controls more "Disloyal" monsters than you. Select 1 "Disloyal" monster you control and 1 "Disloyal" monster your opponent controls. Remove the selected monsters from play and destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field. During your Endphase, you can Special Summon the monster you controlled to your opponents side of the field to draw 1 card OR to return 1 removed from play card to your hand.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[color=#800000]048 - Disloyalty Snare] LoreYou can only activate this card if your Opponent declares an attack with a "Disloyal" monster. Negate the attack and gain control of it. During your Endphase, you can switch control of that monster to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the the half ATK of that monster.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]047 - Disloyal Summoning Art[/size]] LoreOnce per turn, select 1 monster in your hand that can be Tribute Summoned. Special Summon the monster and send "Disloyal" monsters from the field to the Graveyard equal to the number of monsters needed to Tribute Summon it. You cannot Normal Summon or set any monsters in the turn you activated this effect. A monster Special Summoned this way gains 300 ATK and DEF. During your Endphase, sent the top card of your deck to the graveyard.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]046 - Tower Of Disloyalty[/size]] LoreEach time, if the control of a "Disloyal" monsters changes, place 1 Disloyal Counter on this card (max. 6) and gain Life Points equal to the number of Disloyal Counters on this card x 100. Once per turn, if your opponent controls more "Disloyal" monsters than you, you can Special Summon 1 "Disloyal" monster from your Deck with a Level equal to the "Disloyal" Counters on this card. if you do, remove all counter from this card. Neither player can Tribute any monster to Tribute Summon a monster.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]041 - Hengas, Disloyal Lancerider[/size]] Lore1 "Disloylal" Tuner + 1 non-Tuner monsterWhen this card is summoned, you can destroy up to 2 Spell and Trap Cards on the field. This card cannot attack directly. During battle between this attacking card and a "Disloyal" monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, change the attack target to face-down Defense Position and inflict Battle Damage to your opponent equal to the difference x2. If this card inflicts Battle Damage, switch control of it.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]040 - Graoully, The Disloyal Dragon[/size]]Lore1 "Disloyal" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf this card is Summoned, select 1 "Disloyal" monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card. If this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent, you can Special Summon the monster equipped to this card to your side of the field. If you do, you can Special Summon 1 "Disloyal" monster with an ATK of 1800 or lower from your Deck to switch control of this card.[/align] [align=left][spoiler=[color=#0000CD]012 - Loyalty Crusher[/color]] LoreThis card can only be Special Summoned by having 4 or more "Disloyal" monster removed from play while your opponent controls 3 or more "Disloyal" monsters. When this card is Summoned, you can pay 3000 Life Points to return control of all monsters on the field to their original owners. Once per turn, you can remove from play any number of "Disloyal" monsters you control to destroy cards on the field equal to the number of monsters you removed from play by this effect. You can return this card to your hand to Special Summon up to 2 removed from play "Disloyal" monster to your opponents side of the field.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]011 - Disloyal Protector[/size]] LoreWhile this card is on your side of the field, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a card that targets 1 or more "Disloyal" monster(s) and destroy that card. if you do, switch control of this card. While this card is on your opponents side of the field, you can remove from play the top card from your Deck to negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls. if you do, switch control of this card. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to negate the Special Summon of 1 of your opponent monsters, and destroy it.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[color=#8B4513]010 - Reggas, Disloyal Disposer[/color]] LoreWhen this card is Summoned toss a coin and call it. If you called it right, add 2 removed from play cards to your hand. If you called it wrong, dicard 2 cards and remove them from play. During either players turn, you can switch control of this card to remove 2 cards in either players Graveyard from play.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[color=#8B4513]009 - Disloyal Catenae Hurler[/color]] LoreYou can Special Summon this card by removing from play 2 "Disloyal" monsters you control. During either player's Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card. If you do, this card can attack twice this turn. After your Battle Phase, if this card attacked twice, add 1 "Disloyal" monster with an ATK of 2000 or less from your deck to your hand and switch control of this card. You can switch control of 1 monster with an ATK of 2300 or more you control to gain control of this card.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]008 - Angat, Disloyal Titan[/size]] LoreOnce per turn, you can Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monster to your opponent's side of the field to destroy 1 card on the field. If you do, you can switch control of this card to destroy 1 card on the field. Each time the control of this card switches, select 1 "Disloyal" monster your opponent controls with an ATK of 2000 or less and switch control of it.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]007 - Disloyal Fire Swordsman[/size]] LoreIf your opponent controls 2 or more "Disloyal" monsters, you can Special Summon this card to your opponents side of the field. If you do, select 1 "Disloyal" monster your opponent controls and gain control of it. You can remove from play this card plus 1 non-Tuner "Disloyal" monster on the field, to Special Summon 1 "Disloyal" Synchro monster from your Extra Deck with a Level equal the total Levels of the removed monsters.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]006 - Disloyal Blaster[/size]] LoreThis card cannot attack directly. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, it gains 800 ATK during the Damage Step only. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, switch control of this card and Special Summon 1 "Blaster Token" (LIGHT/Thunder-Type/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 0) to this cards Owners side of the field. Destroy all "Blaster Tokens" at the end of your Battle Phase.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]005 - Disloyal Synchron[/size]] LoreOnce per turn, when this card is on your side of the field, you can increase this cards Level by 1. If you do, switch control of this card to your opponent. When this card is on your opponents side of the field, you can switch the control of 1 "Disloyal" monster you control to your opponent to gain control of this card. This cards ATK is equal to it's Level x 350.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]004 - Disloyal Deep Sea Worm[/size]] LoreWhen this card is Special Summoned, change control of this card. Once per turn, when this card is on your side of the field, select 1 "Disloyal" Monster from your deck and add it to your hand. If you do, change control of this card to your opponent. When this card is on your opponents side of the field, remove from play 1 monster in your hand to gain control of this card.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]003 - Little Disloyal Imp[/size]] LoreFILP: Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls OR select 1 "Disloayal" monster your opponent controls and gain control of. If this card would be destroyed after beeing flipped face-up and you destroyed a monster by this card's effect, flip it face-down and switch control of it.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]002 - Hanuman, Disloyal Brawler [/size]] LoreThis card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Disloyal" monster you control. This card inflicts piercing Damage. If this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent, sent the top 2 cards from your opponents deck to the Graveyard and switch control of this card. When this card is destroyed, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each card they control. [/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]001 - Disloyal Summoner[/size]] LoreOnce per turn, when this card is on your side of the field, you can pay 500 Life Points to place 1 Disloyal Counter on this card. If you do, switch control of this card to your opponent. When this card is on your opponents side of the field, you can discard 1 card to gain control of this card. You can tribute this face-up card with 3 Disloyal Counters on it to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Disloyal" monster from your Deck ignoring its Summoning conditions.[/align][align=left][spoiler=[size=medium]000 - Hades, the Disloyal God[/size]] Lore:This card can only be Summoned to your opponents side of the field. Once per turn, when this card is on your side of the field, you can Special Summon 1 "Disloyal" monster from your Graveyard. If you do, switch control of this card to your opponent. When this card is on your opponents side of the field, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard to your opponents side of the field to gain control of this card.[/align] Pls correct the OCG if wrong Credit: DG holosheet, Kometani DA, Jason Engle, Holo and Gold Rare HP DOOM, Booster template E-Hero Kyle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 LoL?I LOVED the pic and the idea! O_O11/10!Will love if you make more! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 AWESOME PIC AWESOME ALL!LOL! I LOVED!Infinite/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltlbrotherz Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 *thumbs up* 10/10Nice effect, nice pic, nice idea :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I noticed that the ratings above me go from 3-2-1 stars.On Topic - 8/10Seems like your opponents will have more time with it than you, and the ATK and effect don't make up for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 all right since you admitted to your own archetype I'll like the fake type slide The only problem I have is that your opponent will be controlling it far longer than you are, so this is UPed 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I'm really happy that you criticized the card^^ i will change it immediately cause your right. Booster Pack added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Really like the idea. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Thank you^^ What can be improved? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I enjoy these cards...That Hades seems like a worthy opponent... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Thanks^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Hm, improvement. Try to add support that maybe does damage whenever a switch card switchs sides. Also, these cards seem to have fairly big downsides, so they should all be really strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Hm' date=' improvement. Try to add support that maybe does damage whenever a switch card switchs sides. Also, these cards seem to have fairly big downsides, so they should all be really strong.[/quote']Thanks for this opinion and advice^^I have field spell card in mind which will increase your life points everytime a disloyal monster changes sides. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 good cards9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Thanks i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Well new card added^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 limited edition need gold sticker ;)the card itself is great ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Thanks^^More comments??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 which card was the new card you added in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 the Hanuman ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 which card was the new card you added in?The latest card we add was humanoid^^We're going to add a new card "Tower Of Disloyalty"^^Just waiting HP Doom gets online and he will post it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Update: Tower of DisloyaltyAll High-Level "Disloyal" monsters will only be able to be Special Summoned, just for you to understand the last effect of the new card.Rate and Hate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 I'm not sure about the OCG on the tower, its a bit hard to understand. Otherwise it seems good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Thanks sephiran^^Can anyone fix the OCG please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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