ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 the only problem with your new card is for the calling wrong effect you should have said what will happen if you can't discard 2 cards from your hand to be removed from play 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 thank you ragnarok!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Amazing pics, as always.OCG is fine.Gold Rare is amazing, as always²9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Thanks Raphael ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JudmentSoul Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 This is awsomeMake more this is getting better and betterAwsome pictures100/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Thanks dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 BUMP C'mon people!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Lovin' the new card. Great Holo and pic. I love the idea of control switching. Seems like they would just work the field :D Great OCG, escpecially for such interesting effects. Please, for the love of god, add more! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Thanks kliffi^^ UPDATEDDisloyal Protector added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 1 question, why aren't all the cards Switch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 these cards are great 10/10 but Where is the booster pack it's not there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Thanks Tomtekorv for reminding me that the newest card should be switch^^ i forgot that:D Some Cards aren't switch to balance them, because a non-switch monster's effect can be used by your opponent then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 o wait now the booster pack is there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJGoten Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 The pic is awesome nice effect 13/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 awesome detalided holo you got there HP... pic is great, you know you are the master on the gold rares and in the OCG too^^ + creative effects 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 thanks bud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Okay, thanks for the answer :DThe pics are great, but I might already have said that but I say it anyway! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 no problem tomtekorv and thanks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 This is my favorite Set ever. Creative idea, the pics are quite a spectacle, and the OCG is flawless. +1 Rep, man. For the love of god, add more! Haha! I just wish that the Tower of Disloyalty and Disloyal Summoning Art could have more creative names, and the art for Disloyal Summoning Art doesn't fit the rest of the pics (Which are amazing). Other then that, I think you did terrific. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Thanks man!! Raphael X and i will start a new set, the first card is already posted (i think it's a creative idea too:D:D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 I do recommend this, however: With the Switch subtype, don't take the easy way out and make it, for example, Warrior / Subtype / Effect ...You can make it nicer looking by replacing "Effect" with "Switch" and simply having "Warrior / Switch" You can do this if you Download Mozilla Firefox (which is free) and replace "subtype=effect" in the HTML coding with "subtype=Switch" ...It would make this neater, nice, the works. Just a suggestion. Totally optional :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Fix:While this card is on your side of the field, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a card that targets 1 or more "Disloyal" monster(s) and destroy that card. If you do, switch control of this card. While this card is on your opponents side of the field, you can remove from play the top card from your Deck and negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls. If you do, switch control of this card. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to negate the Special Summon of 1 of your opponent monsters, and destroy it. Not really fond of the pic. But I say that to everything, GFX is just a crutch for people. It works because half of YCM cannot or does not want to read effects. Let's take it apart: Effect is interesting. You pay 1k LP, you save something, and switch the control. Which is good and balanced, given the ATK / DEF. So, basically, you are essentially not allowing your opponent to attack, otherwise, you get it back. Also, the attack gets negated too. So they can't just build up more force and kill you when you get it back. Last effect, makes this card close to being Solemn Judgement, but without the huge LP cost. As creative as you can get, it is vastly OP. There are some limits for creativity, remember that. Lastly, I don't give rates, I give useful critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 the OCG looks fine the way it is the only modification is the very first effect, I'd make it so you can only use that effect once per turn 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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