Cloister Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 [align=center] Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Deck by Tributing 1 face-up Psychic-Type monster you control. Once per turn, you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount. Each time a player gains Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the same amount. When this card is destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects: -1: Halve your Life Points and add this card to your Deck. -2: Double your Life Points and remove this card from play. Any suggestions or OCG fixes are appreciated! :D [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Usefull effect.I find no errors.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 VERY nice, I like it. 10/10Well earned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 It is way to Op, becouse it can get like 4000 ATK if summoned in start. And it can alse increase it's ATK even more.You should make it that the halve LP gain is only for a few (1) turns.A 7.9/10, for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Way too OP'd (If you damage your opponent with a direct attack this card would be way tooooooooooooooo OP'd).I don't like the image (it only shows the head).OCG is good (I don't find any error).Creative and playable.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 The last effect makes it OPed I know, but that is why I posted the card, so I could change it if it was OPed, and since you think so I'll change the last effectAnd btw, Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I don't know how a card can be summoned from your deck...i think this part makes it OP:Once per turn, you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount.a cool idea and no OCG errors, so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 What guyz above said, a bit OP'd.I like the pic and the ideia is interesting, though.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 updated!I don't know how a card can be summoned from your deck...i think this part makes it OP:Once per turn' date=' you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount.a cool idea and no OCG errors, so 9/10[/quote'] Well, if the card says so it canIt is way to Op' date=' becouse it can get like 4000 ATK if summoned in start. And it can alse increase it's ATK even more.You should make it that the halve LP gain is only for a few (1) turns.A 7.9/10, for now.[/quote'] I made this card so it wouldn't get so OPed 'cause you would start with 4000 LP not 8000, but if you play with 8000 it would be very OPed I know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 updated!I don't know how a card can be summoned from your deck...i think this part makes it OP:Once per turn' date=' you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount.a cool idea and no OCG errors, so 9/10[/quote'] Well, if the card says so it can Yeah how is this gonna work? are tributing 1 psychic-type monster and then this card will be Special Summoned out of your Deck without seeing it before or something? Would this card Special Summon itself or can it only be Special summoned by a card effect? i can't imagine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 updated!I don't know how a card can be summoned from your deck...i think this part makes it OP:Once per turn' date=' you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount.a cool idea and no OCG errors, so 9/10[/quote'] Well, if the card says so it can Yeah how is this gonna work? are tributing 1 psychic-type monster and then this card will be Special Summoned out of your Deck without seeing it before or something? i can't imagine well, effects can be activated in the Deck, like they can be activated in the Graveyard or when they are removed from play so...And if not before, they can now :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 :D:D ok this is right^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Yes, but I love it ^^comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 easy to special summon Personally I wouldn't have your LP to raise its atk, I'd make it less of a LP pay, and the atk gain only for 1 turn 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Deck by Tributing 1 face-up Psychic-Type monster you control. Once per turn' date=' you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount. Each time a player gains Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the same amount. When this card is destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects: -1: Halve your Life Points and [b']return[/b] this card to your Deck. -2: Double your Life Points and remove this card from play.Don't look too much at the fix, its only 1 word xD your OCG is good. -Its a nomi (can't be Summoned by any other waly) with 0 ATK.. that will cost 1/2 LP to be Summoned and will loose part of its gained ATK when you try to recover your LP.-Even if you can pay each turn to increase its ATK. Life Points don't come back on their own, this card is going to gain fewer and fewer LP each turn (assuming someone wanted to pay for a second time).-When it dies, you can pay MORE Life to return it to the Deck, being able to be used again but not very likely if you already used it and diminished your Life once before. -The best effect is the one that Doubles LP. I would use it for that, you Pay enough to Summon 3 and have them stay at 0 ATK.. donot worry about their ATK. You keep gaining Life without worring about them, then when you have enough you have them destroyed with Torrental Tribute or something and multiply your Life Points x8 ..... (X Life)(2)(2)(2)=8X [everything multiplies] Where do people say its OP? it needs set up to Summon it, decrease your own LP first, and have them leave the field in a certain way. This is not overpowered ;) (but the pic could be better though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Hey, I created the Plasma-Type :( Anyways, good card10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 this is good... but i see an OTK this + Megamorph = Game. but i like it..... no errors as far as i can see.... but the "same amount" bit should be "equal to the Life Points you paid" but im not sure....9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Deck by Tributing 1 face-up Psychic-Type monster you control. Once per turn' date=' you can halve your Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by the same amount. Each time a player gains Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the same amount. When this card is destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects: -1: Halve your Life Points and [b']return[/b] this card to your Deck. -2: Double your Life Points and remove this card from play.Don't look too much at the fix, its only 1 word xD your OCG is good. -Its a nomi (can't be Summoned by any other waly) with 0 ATK.. that will cost 1/2 LP to be Summoned and will loose part of its gained ATK when you try to recover your LP.-Even if you can pay each turn to increase its ATK. Life Points don't come back on their own, this card is going to gain fewer and fewer LP each turn (assuming someone wanted to pay for a second time).-When it dies, you can pay MORE Life to return it to the Deck, being able to be used again but not very likely if you already used it and diminished your Life once before. -The best effect is the one that Doubles LP. I would use it for that, you Pay enough to Summon 3 and have them stay at 0 ATK.. donot worry about their ATK. You keep gaining Life without worring about them, then when you have enough you have them destroyed with Torrental Tribute or something and multiply your Life Points x8 ..... (X Life)(2)(2)(2)=8X [everything multiplies] Where do people say its OP? it needs set up to Summon it, decrease your own LP first, and have them leave the field in a certain way. This is not overpowered ;) (but the pic could be better though) Well, I have changed almost the entire effect of it and made it less OPed (or not OPed at all) :D Thanks for comment ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 I am dissoponted I found no mistake 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 thanks for the votes everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 good card9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Much better.A 9/10, now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 thanksI changed the effect more than I had in mind but it turned out pretty good anyway.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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