Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I didn't find any errors with the grammar. And do me a favor, I know it's a fake type card. I just use my imagination. Well...what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set." "As long as this card is on the field" and "points" aren't necessary.It should be:"All WATER/FIRE monsters you control gain 400 ATK." If they're Nomis, how do you summon them?And, eh, effects are a bit bland imo. Also, Groudon breaks the Rule of 3000. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 These weren't too bad. My only question is: How do you summon them? Is there some other card's effect that you must use? Otherwise, follow Byak's suggestions, and everything will be dandy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 What do you mean how to summon them? o-o 6 stars monsters require 1 tribute, don't they? 8 stars monsters require 2 tributes. I don't see what's the problem here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 You said they can't be Normal Summoned or Set.That means they can't be tributed. >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Oh, it does? I thought normal summoning = 4 stars monsters. Meh, guess I'll need to change that. Gonna take a few secs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Don't forget the other slight errors I pointed out above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Epic fail dude OCG is terrible but the pics are cool otherwise I give you a 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 @Slicer, 2/10? OCG is terrible? Excuse me, but I don't see anything wrong with that grammar. Are they good enough now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Dandy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I don't much care for them. The effects are just plain out boring. And i don't think Kyogre is a whale...that's like Wailord.The Ocg is good. But not on the 1st try. And remember, always update your cards in your 1st post. Don't make another post with more cards in it, that just means if you keep doing that, everyone would have to search each page for all the cards you've made. Not to mention the updated ones.Pics are not that good. 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I don't much care for them. The effects are just plain out boring. And i don't think Kyogre is a whale...that's like Wailord.The Ocg is good. But not on the 1st try. And remember' date=' always update your cards in your 1st post. Don't make another post with more cards in it, that just means if you keep doing that, everyone would have to search each page for all the cards you've made. Not to mention the updated ones.Pics are not that good. 2.5/10[/quote'] Ah, okay. I'll remember to update on the first post.How Kyogre is not a Whale? Look at him, he looks like an Orca.About the pics - Those are the best pics on the net that look fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I don't much care for them. The effects are just plain out boring. And i don't think Kyogre is a whale...that's like Wailord.The Ocg is good. But not on the 1st try. And remember' date=' always update your cards in your 1st post. Don't make another post with more cards in it, that just means if you keep doing that, everyone would have to search each page for all the cards you've made. Not to mention the updated ones.Pics are not that good. 2.5/10[/quote'] Ah, okay. I'll remember to update on the first post.How Kyogre is not a Whale? Look at him, he looks like an Orca.About the pics - Those are the best pics on the net that look fine.Well Since you don't have PM'ing enabled, looks like im gonna have to talk to you through here.I wouldn't consider him a whale, for he has wings. He's his own creature. Just like Arceus doesn't look like anything. They're legendaries. They can look however they want to.And there's a site called Deviantart.com that has the best pics on the web. Go there for all your awesome pic needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I don't much care for them. The effects are just plain out boring. And i don't think Kyogre is a whale...that's like Wailord.The Ocg is good. But not on the 1st try. And remember' date=' always update your cards in your 1st post. Don't make another post with more cards in it, that just means if you keep doing that, everyone would have to search each page for all the cards you've made. Not to mention the updated ones.Pics are not that good. 2.5/10[/quote'] Ah, okay. I'll remember to update on the first post.How Kyogre is not a Whale? Look at him, he looks like an Orca.About the pics - Those are the best pics on the net that look fine.Well Since you don't have PM'ing enabled, looks like im gonna have to talk to you through here.I wouldn't consider him a whale, for he has wings. He's his own creature. Just like Arceus doesn't look like anything. They're legendaries. They can look however they want to.And there's a site called Deviantart.com that has the best pics on the web. Go there for all your awesome pic needs. I don't have PM enabled? Oops, I'll enable it.Deviantart.com, huh? Alright, I'll look on there. Thanks.You sure those are wings? I think they made his fins like wings so he will have those markings. If he had small fins/wings, that'd be...odd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 OCG's still not fixed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I did fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Why Dinosaur-like and not Dinosaur ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Well...cuz he looks like a dinosaur, he's not exactly one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I'd avoid fake-types if at all possible. It'll save you from a LOT of headaches. Otherwise, your pics look just fine, and your OCG is excellent (better than mine, at least). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I did fix it. No, it should just be "All WATER/FIRE monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I did fix it. No' date=' it should just be "All WATER/FIRE monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF".[/quote'] Dude, look on the description. Groudon gives 500 ATK and DEF for Fire-type monsters on the field while Kyogre gives 500 ATK and DEF for Water-type monsters on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 no man, he means fire-type and water-type shud be just "FIRE monsters" and "WATER monsters", cuz those are attributes, not types. the other thing, its not an error, but seriously kyorgre and groudon shud be equal in atk and def. i dnt get why people think groudons better, me and my friend both battled, his groudon against my kyogre levels 85 and 83 respectively, i whooped his butt, plus each of us trained them with training and no stat boosts. so they shud be equal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 no man' date=' he means fire-type and water-type shud be just "FIRE monsters" and "WATER monsters", cuz those are attributes, not types. the other thing, its not an error, but seriously kyorgre and groudon shud be equal in atk and def. i dnt get why people think groudons better, me and my friend both battled, his groudon against my kyogre levels 85 and 83 respectively, i whooped his butt, plus each of us trained them with training and no stat boosts. so they shud be equal[/quote'] People think Groudon's better cuz of his height, looks, and..muscles, I think? I find both Groudon & Kyogre strong, I just like Groudon more. That's why I wanted him to have more attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 no man' date=' he means fire-type and water-type shud be just "FIRE monsters" and "WATER monsters", cuz those are attributes, not types.[/quote'] That and "As long as this card is on the field," isn't necessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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