LilAznBoyRoy Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Tell me what you think please! I am new so i want to know what i did wrong and what i did good at? ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Good cards, but bad OCGFor a newbie 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilAznBoyRoy Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 ogc? >< mb newbie haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 OCG = Official Card Grammar Anyway minor OCG errors,nice pictures and good cards overall so 7.5/10 for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 During each End Phase, your opponent takes 200 damage. During each End Phase, gain 200 Life Points. A little simple, people prefer more complicated effects, fyi. The pictures are excellent btw. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Minor OCG and maybe you could make a fusion of both them to have both efects. 9/9.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 They're good for a new guy, they could really be useful if on the field together. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 During each End Phase' date=' your opponent takes 200 damage. During each End Phase, you gain 200 Life Points.[/quote'] Fix'd the Fixes. Minor OCG errors and the effects are somewhat boring. I freaking love the pictures though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 too short of effects, and the OCG errors have been pointed out already still, it's a good start for someone new 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 During each End Phase' date=' [b']inflict 200 damage to your opponent[/b]. During each End Phase, gain 200 Life Points. Fixed ;) When you are receiving your own damage, its take blabla damage. When you are damaging the opponent, its inflict blabla damage I would say very good for a start. Although cards are kinda... weak, they need a little extra effect and/or some support cards... well that'll be for future references.. for now... 8/10 ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilAznBoyRoy Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Thanks for the advices ;D i corrected them ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Good cards! everything has been said... but maybe put an effect while both cards are on the field?^^ so 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 OCG should be:During each of your End Phases your opponent's loses 200 Life PointsDuring each of your End Phases you gain 200 Life Points Boring effects,Bad OCG,Pics are okay but I have seen them before. (I have been gone for about a year so if I saw the pics that says something.) 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 OCG should be:During each of your End Phases your opponent's loses 200 Life PointsDuring each of your End Phases you gain 200 Life Points Boring effects' date='Bad OCG,Pics are okay but I have seen them before. (I have been gone for about a year so if I saw the pics that says something.) 6/10[/quote'] taking/inflicting damage is not the same as paying Life, and none of the 2 are the same as just "loosing" Life Points =/ but maybe put an effect while both cards are on the field?^^ Also, this^ (completely agree) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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