chizuruotohime Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Helo guys~~!! Are the the two new cards that requsted~~!! The Exa Raiun card is requested by Exa Raiun himself~~!! And Savior Fairy Dragon is requested by myself~~!! Hope you like them~~!! [/center] http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/otohimechizuru/SpeedWorldEX.jpg' alt='SpeedWorldEX.jpg'> During each player's Standby Phase, place 1 Speed Counter on this card (max 12). For every 1000 damage you recieve remove 1 Speed Counter unto this card. By removing a number of Speed Counters from this card, activate one of the following effects:● 3: Normal Spell Card● 4: Equip Spell Card / Quick-Play Spell Card● 5: Continuous Spell Card / Ritual Spell Card● 7: Draw 1 card.● 10: Send 1 card on the field.● 12: Increase the ATK of 1 face-up monster by 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas★Zero Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 good work one those Chizu and Kaibaman did great images for them aswell :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 thanks kingdom neos~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I have one question: Is that a member card? Whatever. Hmmmm... Its easily supported by Umi and Honest. Plus with that Attack Boost it would make an excellent Meta Card!10/10 Oh crappy, SFD's pic won't load. you should call it Majestic Fairy Dragon.Anyways, it suits zeh effect of zeh Majestic dudes, so I give this a 10/10 No, my eyes can't spot OCG errors now. It can only spot obvious ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Really well done! Both cards are very balanced and the pic are very good. Also you have no OCG errors. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 The japanese is the Majestics are Saviors so the names are Savior first, when they will released in the US, they will call majestics.. Thanks for the comment and rate!Added Speed world~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I have one question: Is that a member card? Whatever. Hmmmm... Its easily supported by Umi and Honest. Plus with that Attack Boost it would make an excellent Meta Card!10/10 Oh crappy' date=' SFD's pic won't load. you should call it Majestic Fairy Dragon.Anyways, it suits zeh effect of zeh Majestic dudes, so I give this a 10/10 No, my eyes can't spot OCG errors now. It can only spot obvious ones.[/quote']this^^^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Ehehe~ ... my character card turned out really good! (Somewhat reminding me to a JRPG protagonist in style ^^).For the other two cards, I have to admit that I don't know much the Savior Archetype, and I am not really fond of the Speed World cards, but they seem to be done well, too :) Savior Fairy Dragon seems powerful but balanced, considering it's very difficult to actually summon. Speed World EX is oddly worded (I wonder how it is supposed to sound), but if I understand it properly, it looks like balanced (if a bit slow to work), too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 These are just.... EPIC! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 i dont get why you didnt use the YCM Card Creator.... but thats not a deal at all...They are epic, i like the twist on speed world...10/10 for EPICNESS and TACOZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I like the image for Savior Fairy Dragon, but not for Exa Raiun... Also, Savior Dragon seems very powerful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Oh crappy' date=' SFD's pic won't load. you should call it Majestic Fairy Dragon.Anyways, it suits zeh effect of zeh Majestic dudes, so I give this a 10/10[/quote'] Majestic is a terrible name. Savior is l33t. "Salvation Dragon - Savior Dragon" + "Ancient Fairy Dragon " + 1 non-Tuner monsterOnce per turn' date=' until the End Phase, you can negate the effect(s) of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls, and you gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can select 1 Field Spell Card from your deck and activate it. You can send a Field Spell Card you control to the Graveyard to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your hand. Return this card to the Extra Deck during the End Phase, and Special Summon 1 "Ancient Fairy Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/quote'] Now to rate. Exa looks pretty good. His effects make him overpowered for a Level 5 monster though. Seriously, sat in a Spellcaster deck, he'd gain ridiculous amounts of ATK. The second and third ones are overpowered a bit, not too much though. 8/10 Blargh. Fairy Dragon. Picture looks good. Not sure if it's overpowered, but since it's a Savior Synchro, I guess it's fine.8/10 Speed World EX is the type of Speed World I've been waiting for. Making it awesome. It's balanced and has a nice picture. Although a error is "10: Send 1 card on the field.". It should be "10: Send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard.".9/10 Overall: 9/10Tis Nais. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 for Savior Fairy Dragon, it's not gain Life Points, it's increase your Life Points by all 3 card effects are balanced out, 3rd one's pic isn't as good though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 No duh, its a Magestic Monster, they're supposed to be overpowered xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Actually, Ragnarok, the correct lore is "gain Life Points". xP Yeah, I understand that Savior Dragons are supposed to be powerful... But that card is a little over the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 interesting, the card texts before all say Increase your Life Points by, maybe both are acceptable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 interesting' date=' the card texts before all say Increase your Life Points by, maybe both are acceptable[/quote'] It's like "You control" and "Face-up on the field". Both are acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 ok I see, thanks for pointing that out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 I like them all, but I think "tribute a field spell" is not correct. It would be better as "send to the graveyard". About the pics, well, sometimes I consider JK a rival. I am an artist too, but I cannot make my drawings look the way theirs look. Those are really good. Envy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Of course 'both are acceptable'; old OCG lores are technically correct, just not as proper as they could be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 I just follow the master rules.. master rules are the new OCGrammar like: "your opponent controls" rather than "to their side of the field", or "gain life points "than "increase your life points".....piercing damage is a plus to that But still thank you all for the comments and rate~~!! The Speed World is actually the manga version of Yugioh DQ's Speed World! And about Tribute a field Spell card I was wrong... and about that send 1 card....to where?? hehehehh I was wrong also, it should send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 more please~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Savior Fairy Dragon finally loaded, so a 10/10 for the impressive Art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 more please~!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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