valliant12 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Hi guys, I've made a new card and would like to see how it could be improved. [spoiler=card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Overpowered since there can be a level 4 zombie with 1900 ATK and then making it 2900 is Overpowered.Make it to 500. And anyway here use my Guide to make better cards[spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site, just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Overpowered since there can be a level 4 zombie with 1900 ATK and then making it 2900 is Overpowered.Make it to 500. And anyway here use my Guide to make better cards[spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site' date=' just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far'] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Listen to the above post Oh what I think of this card.Overpowered yesOCG noSimple yesBad pic not too sure about that one Overall 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Overpowered since there can be a level 4 zombie with 1900 ATK and then making it 2900 is Overpowered.Make it to 500. And anyway here use my Guide to make better cards[spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site' date=' just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far'] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Listen to the above post Oh what I think of this card.Overpowered yesOCG no He just didnt capitalize a few words and there is only one mistake Simple yesBad pic not too sure about that one Overall 4/10Ya the card is Simple but good for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 [spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site, just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Oh, you help me a lot about making card, thanks, to Reps, I jus click Quote+ right ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valliant12 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 [spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site' date=' just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far'] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Oh, you help me a lot about making card, thanks, to Reps, I jus click Quote+ right ? How's this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 [spoiler=Find the Image]You can find suitable images on sites such as these... http://www.deviantart.com/http://photobucket.com/http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warriorhttp://www.wizards.com/magic/http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.htmlhttp://www.animecubed.com/galleries/http://www.animegalleries.net/http://www.advancedanime.com/ http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/Or even find images in the showcase section Remember to CREDIT the Artists For example I will choose this image [spoiler=This one]http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg Instead of saving it and uploading via a site' date=' just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far'] Now we will go onto the next step [spoiler=Details]This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect. Finding a good name;Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.But for names, you can either make something like;-The Frightening BeastOR-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster. Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image. It will look like this with most of it filled in. [spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name. For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects. Rough OCG plan:-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases-and lose 500 ATK OCG fixed up:Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases. That's the effect pretty much sorted out If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html And for the ATK and DEFPretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of average ATK and DEF stats.1 : 3002 : 6003 : 14004 : 18005-6 : 23007-8 : 28009 : 300010+ : 4000 *there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header Dragon"The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:ATK: 0 DEF:2200ATK:1900 DEF: 0ATK: 3000 DEF: 100 This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about 300. Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards. Reps Aprreciated Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved. Oh, you help me a lot about making card, thanks, to Reps, I jus click Quote+ right ? How's this? Oh, the pic is more suitable than the last one but u might wanna lower the 1000 to 700 or 500, cause it's too much, let's say a zombie dragon has 1600 ATK the it's boost to 2600, too much ==If you still want to keep it as 1000 boost add something like, each turn you have to pay 500 or 400 LP to keep this card on the field, if you can't destroy that card or you can say while this card is on the field the number of zombies type monster you can control on the field is only 2 =) Have a nice day~ sorry, mistake, I didn't see the 500 there, good good XD you just make urself a perfect card~Might need some detail "All face up Zombie and Fiend type Monsters on the field gain 500 ATK and DEF" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Cool card! However atk and def shoud be, ATK and DEF or ATK/DEF. Still cool card though!! 9.10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 The pic is not Hi-Res 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bran2939 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 i like it for a newcomer, i tent to like dragon cards though, in a duel id use it in my dragon deck! great card now its edited 1000 was tooo much! 5/51.like the name2.effect is good3.ocg is good4.pic is good5.for a newcomer it is good! you get +1 rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 OCG errors. Over powered. 7-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Effect is good but some OCG errorsPic is a bit blurry though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 OCG errors. Over powered. 7-10 You fixed the OPedness. 7.5-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 OCG errors. Over powered. 7-10 You fixed the OPedness. 7.5-10 Something we would expect from you ho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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