GOLDBOMB Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 PLEASE ENJOY THIS CARD ALSO DONT FORGET TO RATE,COMMENT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Here Let Me Fix Your OCG For Every Turn this card is Attacked, this card gains 500 ATK points and 500 DEF points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Don't listen to .:Shaymin:.! You are new.I had that problem too.yAll you have to do is get better effects,pictures and lowere attack and defense,then you should be ok! P.S-Don't listen to everyone telling you to make effect cards!It is your cards and it it up to you! Good try anyway. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Don't listen to .:Shaymin:.! You are new.I had that problem too.yAll you have to do is get better effects' date='pictures and lowere attack and defense,then you should be ok! P.S-Don't listen to everyone telling you to make effect cards!It is your cards and it it up to you! Good try anyway. 7/10[/quote'] I was just helping him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOLDBOMB Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 i am new. im lucky i even found out how to post cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 i am new. im lucky i even found out how to post cards I understand I was just trying to help you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Picture: 7/10. Very creative. Just low quality. OCG: 9/10. You know the problems now. Total: 8.5/10. Very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 YOU LIKE CAPS, DON'T YOU?MONSTER IS NOT A REAL TYPE. WARRIOR SUITS IT FINE. EFfect should be: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each time it is involved in battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gridfreak598 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 I like the idea, Art is alright and OCG has minor errors. 8/10 Note: I'm a beginner too, so I can overlook the minor errors and say this is a pretty good 2nd card!YOU LIKE CAPS' date=' DON'T YOU?MONSTER IS NOT A REAL TYPE. WARRIOR SUITS IT FINE. EFfect should be: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each time it is involved in battle.[/quote'] That may not be what he wants for the effect, Xion. That effect would include "Zien the Killer" attacking other monsters, and therefore you are changing the effect, not correcting it. It's already a fairly powerful effect as it is, although based more on brute force than strategy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 ^Idiot, Xion was giving an OCG fix, not suggesting the effect. Since this is your only legitimate card thus far, I won't lock it. However, lower the stats, otherwise this card is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOLDBOMB Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 SHAYMIN IS A F***ING D**K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 SHAYMIN IS A F***ING D**K Man Stop Arguing with me That wasnt very nice on how you said I was a D--K I am just trying to help you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 guys stop fighting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 guys stop fighting! I would like to stop argung but GOLDBOMB wont stop harrasing me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Don't listen to .:Shaymin:.! You are new.I had that problem too.yAll you have to do is get better effects' date='pictures and lowere attack and defense,then you should be ok! P.S-Don't listen to everyone telling you to make effect cards!It is your cards and it it up to you! Good try anyway. 7/10[/quote']Don't listen to himI like the idea' date=' Art is alright and OCG has minor errors. 8/10 Note: I'm a beginner too, so I can overlook the minor errors and say this is a pretty good 2nd card![hr']YOU LIKE CAPS' date=' DON'T YOU?MONSTER IS NOT A REAL TYPE. WARRIOR SUITS IT FINE. EFfect should be: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each time it is involved in battle.[/quote'] That may not be what he wants for the effect, Xion. That effect would include "Zien the Killer" attacking other monsters, and therefore you are changing the effect, not correcting it. It's already a fairly powerful effect as it is, although based more on brute force than strategy.Idiot he only fixed the effect The card is OPAnd the pic is horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 guys stop fighting! I would like to stop argung but GOLDBOMB wont stop harrasing me Don't worry, I'm here to hand out warnings, and his warning level is at 70% now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 guys stop fighting! I would like to stop argung but GOLDBOMB wont stop harrasing me Don't worry' date=' I'm here to hand out warnings, and his warning level is at 70% now.[/quote'] Thank You Phantom Roxas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 YOU LIKE CAPS' date=' DON'T YOU?MONSTER IS NOT A REAL TYPE. WARRIOR SUITS IT FINE. EFfect should be: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each time it is involved in battle.[/quote']Fiend also suits it..anyways get a better pic and no one can say that they wouldnt like an op'd card in their decks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SANDAA BORUTO Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Actually, the OCG isn't that bad, he just didn't use commas when he should, and he screwed up the spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinzoLord Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 1.5 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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